Planning is a very important activity in our lives. It can give pleasure, even excitement, and it can cause quite severe headaches. __1__ The most significant the task ahead, the more careful the planning __2__ required. Getting to school or to work on time is a task requiring few __3__ or no planning, it is almost routine. A month’s touring holiday abroad,or better still, getting married, is a different matter altogether. If the matter involve a church wedding, a reception, a honeymoon in Venice, __4__ and returning a new home, this requires even more planning to make __5__ sure that it is successful. Planning is our way of trying to ensure success and of avoiding costly failures we can not suffer. It is equally essential __6__ to individual nations and families; the scale may be vary, but the degree __7__ of importance does not. In the essence, a nation planning its resources __8__ and needs do not differ from the familiar weekly shopping or monthly __9__ household budget. Both are designed to ensure an adequate supply of essentials, and if improperly carried out, will avoid shortages, wastage __10__ and over-expenditure.
0 f+ m8 |" [; x, d. N 答案：
4 A% K$ @; o* A( S2 z4 ] 1 将and 改为 or。or表示“或者”，因为前后是两种截然不同的可能性，所以应该用or。
' b) K- f2 f1 R y4 |! s2 C; z 2 将most改为 more
' {+ y- ?( f9 Y! Z1 S$ U; M 3 将few改为little0 P4 h! W& y+ Y
4 将involve 改为 involves。因为主语 the matter 为单数，例如：Although planning involves material investment, even more important is the investment in man.虽然作机会应该包括物资投资，但最重要的是对人的投资。
% h; T7 F$ T" g% T1 j5 \ 5 在returning后加介词to
0 ]: H* \) X5 d: w4 j 6 将suffer改为afford5 y0 }. d& g9 n
7 去掉be。vary是动词，可与助动词或者情态动词构成谓语，也可以独立构成谓语，例如：The weather varies from hour to hour in some mountain districts., L- }. o$ B1 F5 m
8 去掉the。in essence 是固定习语，意为“本质上，实质的“2 c1 `. y6 \4 G8 q5 \/ L" w
9 将do改为 does。主语是动名词复合结构 a nation planning its resources and needs, 应视为单数，例如：Looking after children requires patience.
; P% A) e6 z0 |/ g$ R( } 10 将improperly改为 properly |
发表于 2012-8-14 11:29:10
