改错篇 ：专八模拟考题（三）

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About half of the infant and maternal deaths in developing countries could be avoided if women had used family planning methods to prevent high risk ____1 pregnancies， according to a report publishing recently by the Johns Hopking University. ____2
The report indicates that 5.6 million infant deaths and 2，000，000 maternal Deaths could be prevented this year if women chose to have theirs children ____3
* q) T- `" z, Y7 m6 \7 Dwithin the safest years with adequate intervals among births and limited their ____4
families to moderate size.
This amounts to about half of the 9.8 million infant and 370.000 maternal deaths in developing countries， excluded China， estimated for this year by ____5
4 ?3 J0 g( y% v/ G. U6 j$ ^( ^3 }the United Nation’s Children’s Fund and the US Centers for Disease Control respectably. China was excluded because very few births occur in the high risk categories. ____6
The report says that evidences from around the world shows the risk of ____7
maternal or infant ill and death is the highest in four specific types of ____8
  `% T6 t( s! h9 Q- q6 f' v3 W% G. Bpregnancy; pregnancies before the mother is 18 year old; those after the ____9
mother is 35 years old; pregnancies after four births; and those lesser than two years apart.____10
1. 将 had used 改为 used。
因为此句是虚拟语气，表示与现在事实相反，故条件从句中应使用一般过去时。例如:
% v& U& \1 r" |- a" nMany would be wise if they did not think themselves wise. 许多人原本会成为聪明人-如果他们不自以为聪明的话。
; X# y# u0 o; m- r: t% h0 b2. 将 publishing 改为 published
) Y6 i, y( }3 \8 N% H# Breport和publish时逻辑动宾关系，故应使用publish的过去分词短语来修饰report。例如:
Any discovery that we may make， however small， will remain acquired knowledge. 任何可能的发现，不管多么微不足道，都将成为知识宝库中的一部分。
3. 将 theirs 改为 their
. I, n! e! Q* [; H6 d9 y4. 将 among 改为 between
在两次怀孕期间留出足够的间隔时间，故用 between。
, S7 Z, O+ C" |' U: J5. 将过去分词 excluded 改为介词 excluding
: C# G( k" E  qexcluding意为“不包括……”
6. 将 respectably 改为 respectively
respectively 意为 “分别地 ”，符合句子的意思。而respectably意为“可敬的，值得尊敬地 ”。
7. 将 evidences 改为 evidence
evidence 是不可数名词。
7 B, g- W+ v0 z  y+ f8. 将ill改为illness
3 Z+ R  R( i  o$ `9. 将 year 改为 years
10. 将 lesser 改为 less