八级改错指导 ：典型语法错误

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　　语言是评判作文的一个极其重要的因素。在实际的阅卷过程中，语法错误，尤其是较为严重的错误，是阅卷人员的主要“照顾点”，有时甚至是惟一的点;当然那样处理是有道理的，大家可以设想一下，一篇语法上漏洞百出、严重影响表达的作文又会有什么样的好内容呢?如果因为语言上的错误而导致失分，那将得不偿失。因此，认清各种各样的语法错误，尽可能地避免少犯，对于提高作文分是有极大的帮助的。现将我们在阅卷过程中所发现的大量语言错误逐一归类，抽出其中的典型错误，以警示大家，供参考。
. o' C0 N. h" P8 q7 M+ E　　1.句子成分残缺不全
( w' z1 I1 G, r! i6 u' ~3 }　　we always working till late at night before taking exams.(误)
　　we are always working /we always work till late at night before taking exams(正)
　　we should read books may be useful to us. (误)
　　we should read books which may be useful to us. (正)
# n% i7 Z; a. @5 l$ P. @6 u; h' T　　2.句子成分多余
) u- ^- n4 m% b' U　　this test is end, but there is another test is waiting for you. (误)
　　one test ends, but another is waiting for you. (正)
! a+ m# Y$ X# c$ ]　　the driver of the red car was died on the spot. (误)
3 t) H+ b; z1 P" I+ j" K2 ~4 E　　the driver of the red car died on the spot. (正)
: b7 F$ ~2 B1 r- m7 y　　3.主谓不一致
: s2 z# Y) \. [) c% A　　someone/somebody think that reading should be selective. (误)
8 C( \0 R/ k% v& L　　some think that reading should be selective. (正)
　　my sister go to the cinema at least once a week. (误)
8 l, R% Q" D( C$ b" u. n0 f　　my sister goes to the cinema at least once a week. (正)
8 U3 R! `1 l1 e: B1 R: O# M6 u　　4.动词时态、语态的误用
　　i was walking along the road, and there are not so many cars on the street. (误)
　　i was walking along the road and there were not so many vehicles on the street. (正)
) h- g* d- u& m. x2 \　　we have little time to read some books which we interest. (误)
1 u6 x' y+ I. B& X! W　　we have little time to read some books in which we are interested. (正)
　　i am a student who has studying in the college for two years. (误)
　　i have been studying in the college for two years(正)
　　5.词类混淆
6 A9 K3 f: i* o  T+ y　　it is my point that reading must be selectively. (误)
3 a. N9 \- k9 ?4 {0 @' x8 l　　in my opinion, reading must be selective. (正)
% J2 ~5 [/ ^, ]" c# k　　honest is so important for everyperson. (误)
- r/ N: I2 A- t& W　　honesty is so important for everyone. (正)
　　the old man was hit by a car when he across the street. (误)
　　the old man was hit by a car when he was crossing the street. (正)