语言是评判作文的一个极其重要的因素。在实际的阅卷过程中，语法错误，尤其是较为严重的错误，是阅卷人员的主要“照顾点”，有时甚至是惟一的点;当然那样处理是有道理的，大家可以设想一下，一篇语法上漏洞百出、严重影响表达的作文又会有什么样的好内容呢?如果因为语言上的错误而导致失分，那将得不偿失。因此，认清各种各样的语法错误，尽可能地避免少犯，对于提高作文分是有极大的帮助的。现将我们在阅卷过程中所发现的大量语言错误逐一归类，抽出其中的典型错误，以警示大家，供参考。
. @7 c. V5 |- y2 r 1.句子成分残缺不全
! ?; b5 U% A9 }- u/ ^2 t3 ] we always working till late at night before taking exams.(误), Z/ G/ b: U/ N+ t- F4 [( \1 L
we are always working /we always work till late at night before taking exams(正)
4 p: o. R" b1 n5 ] we should read books may be useful to us. (误): Y4 ^* }1 O+ s) ^- Q
we should read books which may be useful to us. (正)4 @5 U# @2 s; Y5 U- ^5 t
2.句子成分多余
+ L# p$ x6 W; Q7 ^ this test is end, but there is another test is waiting for you. (误)
4 Q0 d& g* a; W; p) y one test ends, but another is waiting for you. (正)
' e' f6 A Z2 _# j7 i& O/ i the driver of the red car was died on the spot. (误)8 ~3 U2 W5 Y. c* g- i. M1 @0 b
the driver of the red car died on the spot. (正)
6 [! q6 c- s: Y( Y- ] 3.主谓不一致
. X: M! |' S; ]! K( _1 v someone/somebody think that reading should be selective. (误)
( K O4 q, u$ |& S3 L some think that reading should be selective. (正) }$ G: i) S: ~- w, t/ |& m; C
my sister go to the cinema at least once a week. (误)
1 f) X1 @+ m* i/ P# q my sister goes to the cinema at least once a week. (正)* E" j' y2 B8 o$ L6 ~1 m
4.动词时态、语态的误用
/ z4 H6 ]& \' G' r6 w2 T3 X i was walking along the road, and there are not so many cars on the street. (误)
5 V0 d; S6 g/ L i was walking along the road and there were not so many vehicles on the street. (正)5 p7 Y7 l8 B% S8 [: H! F
we have little time to read some books which we interest. (误)7 j. N- E7 ?2 N; f
we have little time to read some books in which we are interested. (正)
4 i1 H- Y$ V# }* l3 H% s% ~ i am a student who has studying in the college for two years. (误)
N" o. M% v. U( N+ G2 Y) I4 L i have been studying in the college for two years(正)) ]1 i+ {8 n- V, @
5.词类混淆. O4 t8 ]4 f) p7 P2 h) [* \1 ~
it is my point that reading must be selectively. (误)& d/ e+ k0 } K( ~
in my opinion, reading must be selective. (正)( H1 V9 z3 w4 @9 L! l. I+ g" _3 ^
honest is so important for everyperson. (误)
5 Q4 x& r- W* L! b# T# U& L* K; j) ?+ S honesty is so important for everyone. (正)
! v( l7 Y1 z/ \" u3 d. c" t the old man was hit by a car when he across the street. (误)
" q6 S' \# H# \1 h" B! j the old man was hit by a car when he was crossing the street. (正) |
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