专八模拟考题辅导：改错篇3

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About half of the infant and maternal deaths in developing countries could be avoided if women had used family planning methods to prevent high risk ____1
pregnancies， according to a report publishing recently by the Johns Hopking University. ____2
The report indicates that 5.6 million infant deaths and 2，000，000 maternal Deaths could be prevented this year if women chose to have theirs children ____3考试就到
within the safest years with adequate intervals among births and limited their ____4
: \. f9 R0 I  {- H' P" j/ bfamilies to moderate size.
This amounts to about half of the 9.8 million infant and 370.000 maternal deaths in developing countries， excluded China， estimated for this year by ____5
1 ^+ ^* z" s& V: R. ?4 `" wthe United Nation’s Children’s Fund and the US Centers for Disease Control respectably. China was excluded because very few births occur in the high risk categories. ____6
$ j! E+ w2 v& S' S  n4 X6 ]  ZThe report says that evidences from around the world shows the risk of ____7
5 v+ }$ i8 u1 p6 mmaternal or infant ill and death is the highest in four specific types of ____8
: N6 S% Q4 S  c3 T1 p. a# j0 Upregnancy; pregnancies before the mother is 18 year old; those after the ____9
, v5 @7 [) }$ a& y4 Y  C+ Emother is 35 years old; pregnancies after four births; and those lesser than two years apart.____10
1. 将 had used 改为 used。
9 n* f* w2 Q' H, X4 @6 z1 D$ W" U. p" m3 h因为此句是虚拟语气，表示与现在事实相反，故条件从句中应使用一般过去时。例如:
Many would be wise if they did not think themselves wise. 许多人原本会成为聪明人-如果他们不自以为聪明的话。
+ x5 v) B7 ~) e( C. q2 z2. 将 publishing 改为 published
report和publish时逻辑动宾关系，故应使用publish的过去分词短语来修饰report。例如:
. {2 y. i* P* t! h& JAny discovery that we may make， however small， will remain acquired knowledge. 任何可能的发现，不管多么微不足道，都将成为知识宝库中的一部分。
3. 将 theirs 改为 their考试大的美女们
! d! F, p; D- ]- m9 c4. 将 among 改为 between
在两次怀孕期间留出足够的间隔时间，故用between。
3 m& ^( w0 p' F, B' g& e" \5. 将过去分词 excluded 改为介词 excluding
5 t4 j! D* Y" Aexcluding意为“不包括……”
6. 将 respectably 改为 respectively
( S7 V0 b! y, G& i( `6 grespectively 意为 “分别地 ”，符合句子的意思。而respectably意为“可敬的，值得尊敬地 ”。
7. 将 evidences 改为 evidence
evidence是不可数名词。
8. 将ill改为illness
8 b, j2 e; n5 a9 B* J3 q* j9. 将 year 改为 years 10. 将 lesser 改为 less