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</p> 比较下面三对句子：
; g) _; X4 Z( P+ ~- z A. They bought a bicycle in Beijing in a small shop which costs $ 25.00.
+ H5 |) {( Z7 @8 `# c They bought a bicycle for $25.00 in a small shop in Beijing.
' S& ?; s. h, [& s. K- g B. He was warned not to drink water even in a restaurant which had not been boiled.& G" C( U9 a9 i+ u
He was warned not to drink water which had not been boiled.
- ^9 Y9 F2 d4 |% }) X C. Those who work rapidly get ill in these conditions.% j" N# U4 ?9 `+ ]/ C+ F) F
Those who work in these conditions rapidly get ill.& [# O6 N$ Y/ m$ O4 ^% K# w
(6) 避免在同一个句子中使用意义不同的同一个字。4 g# g, c; o: K& p
We shall take a firm line with the firm．* H" j' p4 L1 H
We shall take a strong line with the film．
$ k4 `$ S0 R- V' t8 L 3．简洁(Conciseness)
$ p8 I5 F, O$ l$ T4 p A. We have begun to export our machine to countries abroad.
" S# _, Z' D- q) X+ C f9 ~1 B We have begun to export our machines.3 w/ v5 c" M: I& M( P3 S5 D- b- ~
B. In the event that you speak to Mr. Wood in regard to production, ask him to give consideration to the delivery schedule.
. p4 t9 i- C+ o If you speak to Mr. Wood about production, ask him to consider the delivery schedule.3 I, f# ~5 k6 k5 l4 d
C .We require furniture which is of the new type.- I8 A% W. B- w
We require new-type furniture.
" u+ r% e# y0 V. v8 v j% P (1)使用简洁的语言(Use simple language)" w2 S* J' t% Q4 v1 b
尽量使用 避免使用
6 D" ?: p9 I, W! I6 M' f please will you be good enough to
. @' @( [& A/ ^ prefer express a preference for
+ O/ C2 D, @, G v because for the reason that
4 J: f. _1 l& n (2) 少用陈词滥调(Omit trite expressions)& L+ {+ z, [ p+ N6 R- Z; Q H
as the case may be
$ H' \, @) ^: ` it has come to my attention
; }% Y# a) c# R3 Y at an early age
, z; h; q4 ^2 t/ Z8 W( X avail yourself of this opportunity
& J# h/ R: I. e( \: t" v$ U5 ? previous to* v# M8 m" k! l# v$ B- U( g5 G
crack of dawn: N" D2 y( T2 |7 ]
pursuant to your request5 y% S( I+ L! d. K3 \; d* z4 f" Q
take the liberty to" f7 {# T8 | H6 D6 F }4 G
due to the fact that
5 o1 E6 Z2 Z+ p6 H0 T1 o# K; u9 X( l thanking you in advance; e/ N0 u! L2 o2 t5 k4 R
enclosed herein
. l& ?- V7 ]% O6 s this is to inform you
2 m; |: I- n1 M" E% B under separate cover8 W, t" k7 `" C1 m, Z/ T$ Y& {5 ~; t$ ^5 X
with kindest regards
! A, H/ Q$ X; y6 y& ~) M1 {4 d I wish to state
9 ]; X0 M" t, i4 B. f9 N: C+ x& ]. [ (3) 避免冗长的表达方式和不必要的重复(avoid wordy expressions & unnecessary repetition)。1 O% q* [7 I, @: u, b
Wordy Concise4 |3 `% q$ s8 [. |2 ?: k
1. We would like to please
% c- u; l# O; ~! \ b8 E- Y, L" [0 w% Y 2. For the month of August for August
+ w3 @" x0 o( o# S: A' L @% @ 3. Pursuant to the end of this week now: S. y8 V$ _1 W; e/ I) ^+ T
4. A long period of time a long time
. u. H6 R9 u8 C7 j5 p 5. At this time now
8 U2 q8 Y6 U R2 q 6. Is at this time is0 `' r& a; v# [3 f8 d+ e: e1 Z- A" R( y
7. The weight was higher than the weight was greater than
; Q! w1 Q% X% s, Y6 s; b* P: w3 L3 K7 O: r 8. I expected it to be expected5 q, R: `) E! t" R* y3 p5 X
9. During the year of 1995 during 1995 ~8 Q/ u/ c' U) A: S2 @
10. For the development of for developing. c/ r8 u9 P7 \( e
11. In the city of Dallas in Dallas2 k. d0 q! g! v- M+ R
12. The problem was that the car would not the car would not start ( c3 b6 H* U% R8 \
start
- s/ s5 b/ v! o% t, H 13. Square in shape square
: d- \- f7 Y- T# O ~+ s; N 14. in accordance with your request you requested
/ Q- A) s9 U- \7 _, r' Q9 z0 \6 C 15. Sign on the front of this form sign this form
; [, F" _1 ?9 H+ `$ L( ?( P9 y+ E 16. During the time that while5 y5 Z3 \$ t/ l% G! X' b+ R) P" g
17. Consensus of opinion we agree6 r- c% C: K+ B
18. Remember the fact that remember
+ H8 I6 w- A. t* h" a 19, Held a meeting met
: q+ U2 @/ q9 [9 x- J6 Q# o 20. this is the situation at this time now
- ~2 U3 [* `: T, n2 {& ?, O (4)删改无关紧要的成份(Remove unneeded facts)
" `( Q, f6 ~( j* ? A. It should be noted that this is the best we can do,
1 ^2 T( H! N# { B. For your information we enclose a catalogue.9 f7 \" @& S6 ]+ B2 }
C. Please be advised that we have received your invoice.' Y1 g2 J. B9 y% ^' m5 B
1. as soon as possible by July 10% D6 n# x% C, Z0 P) X4 i/ n
2. as you indicated in your letter as you indicated9 d$ |7 e) X* d8 m! U0 @* |% j0 v
3. at all times always
8 L$ O# K/ g4 c# A4 D- x; s9 Q 4. at this time now {& I/ i8 c: E$ s2 [/ k
5. continue to utilize the old form until start using the new form on February1 W4 @8 S8 V: M
such time as the new form is available
2 X7 p5 z9 r9 O" p$ I" @7 A: ?' F 6. despite the fact that despite$ L5 Y- R- @( }9 J% g! O0 E% q( u/ N( e
7. for the month of April for April
1 n: M5 m& ^6 R 8. for obvious reason that because5 H( m9 A' ~' M Z+ J J/ [3 l
9. I would ask that you please0 }3 P6 x' F+ Y* J% p3 Q0 [& t
I0. in conjunction with with w" t! c* d7 h( S
11. in the mere recent past recently
; k! S+ o5 Z- g L V* V 12. in the unlikely event that if
/ K3 F2 h$ E! Z" I) ?2 ?* B/ t 13. in the unlikely event that I am unable to if I am late, please delay the meeting
! Q/ M; p1 O( }# V+ Z be on time, please delay the meeting/ E# m1 ?2 H& r1 } y) J$ h+ B
14. in view of the fact that because2 y; x+ J; ^7 e
15. it will be greatly appreciated if you please
" X8 j+ w4 N/ O+ l0 Z 16. our production of the new product will production will begin on July 1
4 U Q* f0 l" q, Q- s commence on July 1
. v* L% S9 {1 Y/ e i% d 17. please be advised that we expect you to please review the contract
( G' D5 j# a4 _* b' e% S review the enclosed contract6 B4 Q& I. o4 R$ D( B
(5)多使用主动语态的句子结构以明确表达意思。9 P! W" T& ^3 l
Payment of their accounts will be made by Johnsons next week．9 d- N( W/ j$ m+ x: Z. z5 d
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