2011年商务英语辅导：考试课堂答疑精选(9)

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　　1.问题：To:
　　From:R&D Director
　　Our factory will soon have a visit from health and safety inspentor,it will take almoost two weeks.
　　Health and safety are always essential to a factory.According to this inspection,not only can inspect whether our meet the standar but also can raise our factory's  reputation.
　　We should ensure that our facilities would be safed and keep factory environment cleanliness.
0 ^( G1 @& o) ?7 d2 M　　老师，给所有员工写，那TO之后的内容该怎么写？
　　回答：To:
　　From:R&D Director
( k' A0 e- A* `# z8 S　　Our factory will soon have a visit from ( 应该用by) health and safety inspentor,it will take almoost注意拼写 two weeks.
5 P2 ^0 C" N9 H: z6 x9 ]. p" P, z　　Health and safety are always essential to a factory.According to this inspection,not only 缺主语 can inspect whether our meet the standar 拼写 but also can raise our factory's reputation.
　　We should ensure that our facilities would be safed （用形容词safe）and we should keep factory environment cleanliness(用clean形容词).
　　这篇文章的语法错误太多，以至于读者在阅读时产生困难。比如：According to this inspection，其实应该表达成This inspection can not only .....but also。
　　再比如：whether we meet the standards
　　所以一篇商务文章的好坏可以从两个方面看，一是 语言表达，这个方面你还需要慢慢来。第二，就是发挥点。就本文来看，发挥点没有写好，你在写作之初并没有设想好健康与安全检察员监察的理由，所以本文第起来很晦涩，也好像脱离实际。不过别着急，一点一点做，
4 x0 z& a& |" q8 K! K0 P. i　　2. 给所有员工写，TO之后的内容写成：
0 T+ c  n8 K3 D% L/ L4 |/ {　　TO: All staff (你的写法是准确的)
　　2.问题：老师您好
　　练习册中 Review Unit1(1-4)
2 U+ m7 @& w' d　　30. W've beaten our sales ___ by about 16%this year. a. forest  b. strategy c.goal
' G# B' D; t8 c1 k! i　　答案是 A,  我觉得C也不错啊 ,我们打败了销售目标的16%
3 ~9 b8 r4 d$ o; M4 [6 a　　32.We___about golf for about half an hour on the phone.
　　a.chatted   b.discussed c.talked
" v+ S5 w0 t3 x% P0 ~; A　　答案是A, 我觉得 C 是对的啊, 短语是 talk about  而且CHAT 一般做名词,或者是 不及物动词.
　　35. I circulated the ____ by email in advance of the meeting.
　　a. memo  b.agenda c.guarantee.
　　答案是 B, 我选的是 A ,也不觉得错啊~
0 r' n5 S& @5 E: O& r　　回答：30   注意你的拼写   SALES FORECAST   销售预期目标      GOAL只体现目标 没有体现预期  所以是A
　　32  做讲和说的时候 TALK 可直接加宾语      而CHAT 比如: A COLUMN DEVOTED TO CHAT ABOUT POPULAR SCIENCE       大众科学讲话专栏  所以是A
$ C% m# a& t7 q% v6 j1 ^　　35  AGENDA 是专门指会议日程 安排 而MEMO是会议记录  在开会前应该传的是安排  会议结束后传的是会议记录  你看我们现在开会了还是没呢?
　　3.问题：您好,老师
　　We've changed insurers, but they still keep debiting our account each month.
. g3 ~! V6 U# R* Q" k  g2 W　　这句话如何翻译,这里的debit our account 怎么理解,跟 credit our account 有什么区别?
5 M" ]' l# ]! Q4 S4 E　　回答：We've changed insurers, but they still keep debiting our account each month.
　　这里的debit our account 怎么理解,跟 credit our account 有什么区别
" {8 E( T- L: M- h% q' h　　这句话的理解是“我们已经更换了保险公司，但他们还是每月在我们的帐户里记帐。”
　　debit our account是在帐户的借方记帐。也就是从帐户里提款。
' O4 R, I/ C) n/ G# D/ b! G7 p　　credit our account是在帐户的贷方记帐。也就是把钱打进某人的帐户。