2012商务英语写作指导：合同五

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461. This agreement will remain valid for one year and shall become effective on the date of signing.
$ O. [/ r+ ?4 S本协议有效期为一年，签署日起开始生效。
462. We’d like to make the contract to be valid for two year at the beginning.
$ R! F; y, L8 R/ b* G刚开始，我们先把合约的期限定为两年。
463. I think we better make some changes in the wording of this sentence.
4 C% \$ g( x9 C# q  I; ^我想这句话的措辞最好能做一些修改。
! D' D3 ^/ m* f' }464. Isn’t it better to word it in this way?
/ W, }6 d. @% b$ `  i% A( a这样说是不是会好一些呢?
465. I’d like to replace this phrase with “after the date of delivery”.
我想这个词语换成”在交货日之后”