2012商务英语写作指导：合同五

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461. This agreement will remain valid for one year and shall become effective on the date of signing.
8 X0 O0 c6 D$ Z8 G- {3 X/ \本协议有效期为一年，签署日起开始生效。
0 ~& {& S- \8 n) |5 @2 A4 ?462. We’d like to make the contract to be valid for two year at the beginning.
" U7 n: z- h* P4 N刚开始，我们先把合约的期限定为两年。
# a' ]9 G# o; P- A463. I think we better make some changes in the wording of this sentence.
" X/ N4 a: A; ~( H* K  L+ _4 j我想这句话的措辞最好能做一些修改。
464. Isn’t it better to word it in this way?
' g, D: Z2 _- N9 w1 F1 i这样说是不是会好一些呢?
7 g+ c. t/ ]! m0 d( b- n465. I’d like to replace this phrase with “after the date of delivery”.
  P8 }% b  i& L$ ~8 i. u! C我想这个词语换成”在交货日之后”