本期作文题目:
3 k9 ?$ }% p& E* V Formulate a smoking policy for your office which is fair to both smokers and nonsmokers. Write a 40-50 word memo informing all staff of the policy.
% j6 K2 C8 X! B, {. z. n) G7 b 提示:
8 v. M9 w( l G) L- w& [0 d 我们需要确定,如果我是公司职员,我要在这篇memo中获得什么信息?是不是要知道:; h6 s" p+ n J; j- {
1.新的吸烟政策从什么时候开始;
$ Y4 e7 C" Q0 v" a+ @/ D 2.吸烟区划定在什么地方?: ~4 ]& P% K$ X- e
网友作文一:; M1 Q. I, z$ o) l i$ I7 F# G. a
TO: All Employees; Y. y) S, S, u4 D. ^
FROM: CEO, Willan Smith
. U7 S+ b4 b2 T. G9 O: H5 X6 k SUBJECT: NEW SMOKING POLICY5 O8 g- f7 s7 P; j0 H' s
For all the employees, especially smokers,[1] plz be aware that our company's new smoking policy has been formulated as follow: A main smoking area's going to be restricted before Next MONDAY[2], anyone is not allowed to smoker in non-smoking zone even in the washing room.[3]Plz target the smoking and non-moking area and stick to the company's new policy.[4]Thx.: X9 i- @; R& r' I
名师指导:- a, ]8 Q4 }' L1 n
[1]去掉,抬头已经写过给所有的员工,所以直接从正文开始就行了,费这个事干什么?2 y5 m+ I1 p$ b) n0 ^- I( i
[2]时间不确切,最好是 from next Monday. Before 这个期限是什么时候?如果不能给出确切信息,就不要说,还不如换成具体的吸烟区域更好: be restricted to the room next to the toilet./ F+ M- ?; ~. E& E4 Y
[3]你经常在洗手间吸烟吗?或者你们公司有这样的同事?把这句话去掉。4 V7 h# x/ y' z4 f- ?, N
[4]添加:to ensure that it is fair to all of you.
( S5 S& \+ _% F! G) | _ 网友作文二:. i" v8 k) v8 i2 ?9 ~0 b2 E
To: All staff
- V# ^9 t3 J2 ?9 d! ?: B From: Hope0068
' S/ A7 N. k s Everybody know that smoking is dangerous for your health. And the The studies didn't just point to the ill effects of smoking on those who smoke--non-smokers, too. [1] Notice is hereby given that the smoking area is located in the special corner[2] of the first floor of this building. This come into force on[3] September 15th.Thanks." S: a4 l6 }8 a# j, L9 Z2 Z5 s
名师指导:
% r' K7 v- A5 x [1]Memo 的主要作用就是提醒同事们注意事项,这和吸烟有多有害不相干,去掉。改为:to assure working environment2 d2 `7 J1 k% C
[2]一般的公司都应该给个room' F% U: ^ C' s; P. [8 ^3 p
[3]from 网友作文三:
2 ]9 M" a# P1 ]+ U1 p- K. c' C$ w memorandum
6 N" P7 ?/ Z" U$ W, O6 e- z+ H to : all the staff
. D5 d" j7 u* j P# R/ s from : jeremy
- k2 L1 L1 x" e1 m# ~( c subjuect : new somking policy; p8 P3 _+ R; L- S
do you have a feeling that our office is surrounding by smog all the day, [1]so we will implemented a[2] new policy for somking ,from next week[3] ,we will open an area[4] for the smoking ,and other area is rescricting to smoke ,also there is a punishment when we find you smoke in these area [5]thank you
' K5 A; H) {- h# t8 U 名师指导:0 B: @9 a; D4 @/ ?1 l- Q
[1]去掉来
# Q3 ~! S# ^& B! N! q [2]we will implement a) f6 }* A/ Z8 ?/ }, t9 y: e
[3]Next Monday
1 {' {4 `2 s/ S8 K% H [4]在哪里啊?- @- ]# R2 S* `
[5]关于惩罚,最好不提。3 r; \# ^) M) u
网友作文四:- n1 g s7 J: F; a5 m- g5 d' j
to: All Staff
. B' p; }4 q' u u3 h v1 K from: Susuan Wu
5 j( {& Y! H4 Y+ X( ^3 h' K( O4 X To creat a nonsmoking office room, we hope that smoking is forbidden in the work office from Sep.1st. Would you please enjoy your smoking in the Launch by closing the office door.* o6 `) y w' J2 q* u( T9 \8 n
Thank you for your coperation.5 r C9 _1 Z! d) T- _! x8 Y, y
名师指导:
4 t* { e: D( ^ 整体很干脆,但是语气比较客气,而且没有看出是公司新政策的实行啊!- }' u& |5 S1 R. J6 o0 \0 [" S& O7 O2 k
网友作文五:9 P- {, z, I8 _% i' I }, c
To: All staff F) K: M. ^& R( z4 L7 R8 n
From: Sarah Buffay
7 u$ g* _0 n- S: X* I9 \; | As you all know, there is an increasing dispute about smoking in the office. Now we'd like to formulate a policy both fair to smokers and nonsmokers: The vacant room 408 will be opened as "Smoking Room" from tomorrow. All smokers may go there within the time limitation from 9:00a.m. to 4:00p.m. But smokers are not allowed to smoke outside this room.[1]If you have any problems, please contact me. [2]
: T% H5 F& A. D0 @ 名师指导:0 k: u6 s7 F. h0 _! I. x
[1]去掉。7 T, |0 L) `$ L% P1 B2 x
[2]这是信件的结尾,不是memo的,直接用 thank you 就可以。 |