造句要做到准确、多样以及高分表达
6 U! A2 J( o2 ]8 F! V6 R8 u I 准确的句子表达
% B" V, |3 f' k" G 1. 句型分析" S) F+ e+ T9 U% |) {
英语的句型包括以下几种,简单句、复合句、并列句、并列复合句等。在新托福写作中,一般使用复合句,辅以并列句和并列复合句,当然肯定要有简单句,做到长短句相结合。下面摘抄几个句子给大家认识并分析一下复合句和并列复合句。5 P! h" D, l* R% q" P9 ^- n) h9 |
a. Even though I usually know what I have to say, I cannot always express myself correctly in English.( ~, r7 X+ _& a' Q$ s( B
这句话是一个复合句,由even though引导的让步状语从句。
4 S' Z8 Q1 m: f b. This challenges me to practice my spoken English, with the result that I can complete the speaking tasks more fluently and quickly.7 i, m* `& v* q2 `. K5 C
这句话中是一个复合句。with介词结构中,有一个that引导的同位语从句对result进行解释说明。& U2 r# N7 K( L1 l2 C
c. I think this is less than ideal because any differences in opinion become personal conflicts, and therefore that might jeopardize the employee’s job.
3 Y4 j, r* N2 K0 [ 上句话是一个并列复杂句。and 连接了两个句子,是一个并列句;because引导的原因状语从句。
( E1 k% S! e; z6 h. B$ m+ | d. Shallow writing is indicative of weak critical-thinking skills, and such writing, which is often described as “sophomoric”, receives low mark." Z4 P$ Q b7 T& q# s
这句话同样是并列复杂句。由and连接两个句子,成为并列句,再一个which引导的定语从句。
L3 h8 C" J4 {$ `$ O6 i 2. 有问题的句子的列举( z8 i3 E7 w8 Y6 q5 [8 ^
朗阁海外考试研究中心分析认为,考生写的句子容易出现三个问题:一是使用破碎句,二是使用接连句,三是句子连接不正确。
/ }" y1 n5 a" F' y# F; l 1). 破碎句
* v/ K- [' Q i0 w; R" L4 \ 所谓破碎句,就是句子不完整,通常是没有谓语(或者说谓语是动词的非谓语形式,如分词),或者是从句单独成句。
! h$ U; I- a, Z! [ G8 |- v! B6 V 破碎句:She singing alone. (无谓语,singing是现在分词)! l, P3 K6 m( X7 } g3 U/ F9 P) J
正确句:She is singing alone.: D/ x5 Y+ x. W& k, S
破碎句:He did not come. Because he was sick. (从句单独成句), M! R) t: I3 G2 L
正确句:He did not come because he was sick.
9 l' w9 _- c+ r; P0 V' Z4 F 2).接连句( v( Z. c$ B$ x; ^( ~3 \7 l# x
所谓接连据,就是两个句子直接连在一起,既未使用连词,也未使用正确的标点符号。5 s3 o2 b. x! E h5 Y& o
接连句: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers they have greater freedom in planning their time.
! r4 g! P. N' y! n5 M 正确句一: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers. However, they have greater freedom in planning their time.
! [! k/ y) d+ j9 y( Z7 O 正确句二: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers; however, they have greater freedom in planning their time.! ?. e, I& n, Y) l% {- ~2 H% ^
3).句子连接不正确
% I2 {$ `" s, k: s p$ ~ 所谓句子连接不正确,就是两个独立的句子之间以逗号连接,这是不合英语语法的。正确的做法是以连词、分号、冒号、句号等连接两个句子。) q' j* z- t9 n* {2 X& |/ J% C% u
不正确句: Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change, there is no change in the composition of the chalk.
4 m7 |+ @ P/ s, q* I# i- T$ I' o 正确句: Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change, so there is no change in the composition of the chalk. |