造句要做到准确、多样以及高分表达/ J# p* V' ~6 r" Z$ P# F) W7 M# {
I 准确的句子表达9 e6 l) I* @% C
1. 句型分析
) ]0 G; g W+ O6 }) } 英语的句型包括以下几种,简单句、复合句、并列句、并列复合句等。在新托福写作中,一般使用复合句,辅以并列句和并列复合句,当然肯定要有简单句,做到长短句相结合。下面摘抄几个句子给大家认识并分析一下复合句和并列复合句。
w2 }+ u, V$ B( M- k/ e5 }2 j& C a. Even though I usually know what I have to say, I cannot always express myself correctly in English.
' Y! b1 D1 E- Q l* ~ 这句话是一个复合句,由even though引导的让步状语从句。
# w9 c- }0 y! B. h3 B1 R b. This challenges me to practice my spoken English, with the result that I can complete the speaking tasks more fluently and quickly.6 J6 n2 m [6 }4 u9 _% S# j
这句话中是一个复合句。with介词结构中,有一个that引导的同位语从句对result进行解释说明。2 d$ a' d: a7 j% u+ p$ M
c. I think this is less than ideal because any differences in opinion become personal conflicts, and therefore that might jeopardize the employee’s job.
+ e) V) M( P% h- s 上句话是一个并列复杂句。and 连接了两个句子,是一个并列句;because引导的原因状语从句。
/ \# p% w6 L3 O! t d. Shallow writing is indicative of weak critical-thinking skills, and such writing, which is often described as “sophomoric”, receives low mark.
1 k% e8 R% @* L& h3 }3 M 这句话同样是并列复杂句。由and连接两个句子,成为并列句,再一个which引导的定语从句。
( L2 U3 ]; k0 c& e+ m 2. 有问题的句子的列举
2 o4 i" M/ C0 R! A 朗阁海外考试研究中心分析认为,考生写的句子容易出现三个问题:一是使用破碎句,二是使用接连句,三是句子连接不正确。# X( z' Q; U+ F+ _; T0 U) d( w z
1). 破碎句, N% V% B1 ?% v# ]$ { k1 ?1 D
所谓破碎句,就是句子不完整,通常是没有谓语(或者说谓语是动词的非谓语形式,如分词),或者是从句单独成句。3 H0 ?' s" A& W' I+ p3 N/ N
破碎句:She singing alone. (无谓语,singing是现在分词)
. B9 D! ^! v' i, x# e( x 正确句:She is singing alone.
+ v# C0 D0 j$ k# c 破碎句:He did not come. Because he was sick. (从句单独成句)
; {9 o2 Y* ^0 ^1 Y& H/ ^ 正确句:He did not come because he was sick.7 H A+ _8 U6 A& `2 S8 f
2).接连句
0 H# x! F3 E5 C2 Z8 z, ] 所谓接连据,就是两个句子直接连在一起,既未使用连词,也未使用正确的标点符号。3 m. b5 A. j: n7 Q4 J- c, T: b, F
接连句: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers they have greater freedom in planning their time.
+ _) b# \9 v/ H; V; | 正确句一: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers. However, they have greater freedom in planning their time.4 y( r a, E5 e9 f
正确句二: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers; however, they have greater freedom in planning their time.. @/ V4 b& F0 k9 }4 d4 v
3).句子连接不正确+ O* w ?7 x, `( K, w! N
所谓句子连接不正确,就是两个独立的句子之间以逗号连接,这是不合英语语法的。正确的做法是以连词、分号、冒号、句号等连接两个句子。- i Z, }/ n3 D' b, h1 M/ d
不正确句: Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change, there is no change in the composition of the chalk.; b! x3 ~; A+ }: u
正确句: Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change, so there is no change in the composition of the chalk. |