托福考试辅导：写作易犯错误示例解析—表意重复

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　　表意重复
　　They shocked their friends, devastated their families, crushed their best friends.
　　前面已经提到了朋友，后面又提到朋友。
. C2 @/ S5 C$ D6 O( Y　　The show is so compelling but attractive.
7 ~1 n: d$ H$ p3 @　　compelling和attractive是同义词，所以这里这么写就让人不明白。