1. The artist’s work pushes our civilization to a higher level. ( p9 e! b$ ]3 w1 Y/ G1 i7 f
改进:Artists’ work upgrades our civilization. 5 W8 [0 s! v1 U/ _8 ?
2. For example, you work in a big factory. ( t; `* y& u3 `: _: W6 M1 _
改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
+ w( k( l4 \# V+ Q3. You’ll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job. 7 K1 \' i' c" a/ _" _
改进:You’ll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career. % n0 ?! W; d8 S: \/ J
4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck. ; |7 K2 j F m8 g0 a: X9 Y
改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.
! P3 x( ?" t3 Y* C! M8 L5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level. / _* I5 j2 q$ u
改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.
' x: m: E- P" W) H; R! K6. Their brain is still very young.
" B. ]6 z, y& r6 W9 g8 @改进: They are still immature.
# I& m/ F" ^- Y7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
& q, Q% Z3 R- u8 C改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better. - d6 L4 s" p& |4 Z, x; c
8. They can’t analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
$ O# l1 B( I# ^8 s' Q$ f改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.
' J8 {$ @9 i O9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time. 3 |' l; p6 g& Y& S1 K3 C
改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time. $ w7 A; T Y& {$ A. D& D5 M' ?
10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life. 改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it. |