考生写作必备：常见病句分析（一）

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1. The artist’s work pushes our civilization to a higher level.  
7 T% l1 k" T- a3 L5 W改进：Artists’ work upgrades our civilization.  
2. For example, you work in a big factory.  
) A: ~5 o! B) G* a- ~% Q+ s6 |改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.  
3. You’ll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.  
# N) d1 h: R' ~! h* f改进：You’ll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.  
  ^% q, ~! B2 j; H  l0 y( M3 g4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.  
0 K4 L' Y& F+ G. m7 k6 t! W改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.  
- e  H: k# |/ }0 r; a$ G2 G- U5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.  
改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.  
, Q6 ^) i8 H. c, b6. Their brain is still very young.  
8 J6 q$ m0 |$ v改进: They are still immature.  
7 G; }8 q% J) O, w- b; V" F5 ^  W7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.  
改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.  
) G: w2 L3 `3 g: t4 k- J: ^8. They can’t analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.  
$ d( K  t9 H# E& z改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.  
/ t5 c/ }& j% F6 W. Q! F9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.  
/ h0 p6 l  s4 H" J$ E* ?; B% B改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.  
10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.  改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.