1. The artist’s work pushes our civilization to a higher level.
2 j8 O! B$ C- M% ^8 |: u& A; i9 W改进：Artists’ work upgrades our civilization.
* @* H0 j# B# V4 J* _, r7 c2. For example, you work in a big factory. }( B( i2 Y+ `8 \8 p/ [) {$ H" {( d
改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.
; f ~! i% Y) D5 j3 r3. You’ll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.
, [5 _4 e2 \/ b改进：You’ll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.
" K5 t$ {, {6 {( T3 P) i7 F4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck. % z' I( U. V7 O3 W; V
改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck. ( ^* {8 i2 k& {' C+ y! @
5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.
2 y# u1 R/ R# J& X4 f改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life. / e/ [" _( N+ I
6. Their brain is still very young.
8 C* s: @0 _" s# D2 | F改进: They are still immature. ' S6 V' P/ k& D- s7 D, |# n/ ?
7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.
( K8 S. j6 Y/ K h6 H改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better. # z) w: F# ^* Z! r# a8 X; R7 w Y
8. They can’t analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.
1 W/ z6 P. g& j ]: o改进: They cannot tell right from wrong. 8 G$ d9 P3 }) ?- J; L" p2 x% w- v
9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.
6 ~& N+ u& D% H$ X改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time. 7 O4 `5 Z" L* ]' W
10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life. 改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it. |
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