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[托福写作] 考生写作必备:常见病句分析(四)

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发表于 2012-8-14 23:46:10 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
3 1. I am not good at maths, but English # K- d# y0 e5 L* |+ p; G+ ~" J
改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English. , M$ y; w" e1 s4 W
32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children’s leisure time? 1 k9 g) S5 J! Z$ U6 C
改进: Who is the proper person to plan children’s leisure time?
8 Z4 k% h4 M! h' a33.It is children who clear about their interests. + N1 U9 [9 Y- w1 O5 {4 ?
改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
: ]/ B. R/ d! y) k4 Y4 T8 S" Q# ]34. I agree the latter idea.
7 B7 {' w2 X) E6 D$ |4 E. f改进: I agree with the latter idea.
$ ^1 g* |4 w# E1 |7 k8 H1 Z35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
6 v' l- _! y, {/ u  \" e, {) F改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
( M' U9 l" K! X9 a! F$ F36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now. % I8 S" v& o8 Z( h. B7 O8 ~
改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe. . x' U: E+ @, J) ?
37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are. 3 |: x! s0 u4 i1 G7 n
改进:People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
# z3 [$ j) N+ u6 _9 H( Z38. No one knows all the things. % o4 c( P( P- \* h' F. y2 `$ H
改进: No one knows everything.
% X  c' O' C5 \4 m39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life. " U- F4 E' ]1 ^! U# G
改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
) h, C8 C3 J! v; @7 f) A$ z, b& U6 _6 P40. Each form ofshavingsfriends has its advantages. 改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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