考生写作必备：常见病句分析（四）

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3 1. I am not good at maths, but English
改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
1 i) U( Y- ~  J# Y* G. S32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children’s leisure time?
改进: Who is the proper person to plan children’s leisure time?
33.It is children who clear about their interests.
改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
( V0 ?- P- \0 r  H34. I agree the latter idea.
! l. z0 i& }5 X0 B5 H! N改进: I agree with the latter idea.
# _% j# T. a9 i4 `35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
/ u  V* t% B2 T" ]1 m4 ]' o3 c改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
2 h& I* c+ g* L2 W* {! _; O" Z0 ~37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
38. No one knows all the things.
$ L6 ^0 I+ Q4 t; H. Q& v改进: No one knows everything.
& s2 X+ A* Y$ ?2 `: u6 I, K; {4 l39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
40. Each form ofshavingsfriends has its advantages. 改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.