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[托福写作] 考生写作必备:常见病句分析(四)

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发表于 2012-8-14 23:46:10 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
3 1. I am not good at maths, but English 5 e- N" U; j3 A" w# e! x
改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.   b; u7 y7 H6 A! N
32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children’s leisure time? + N( c6 V5 f' R; S+ w: m* O9 _3 A1 d
改进: Who is the proper person to plan children’s leisure time? . N- E% ^6 \' d4 F, j
33.It is children who clear about their interests.   f+ t: |) t# y, x8 E4 ^7 |
改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests. " J: [1 B" y3 Z$ I# r; o
34. I agree the latter idea.
3 v1 e5 X5 i5 h改进: I agree with the latter idea.
2 K5 E3 x. I' p0 B& G; D: V35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo. ' q, J! S$ ~6 |" x, i
改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
. B  A4 |+ w# i' W/ t. t6 s. |' L36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
, S  @1 _- E! z& q改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe. ! {( s2 k7 T' O! m
37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are. 9 ^; ?8 S/ s5 D- e5 v- g" [
改进:People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
- q) E) ?5 u3 N38. No one knows all the things. 7 R8 y: |/ I( |- H
改进: No one knows everything.
5 M9 E" H& g' g" [& P39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
! X* d% H. K/ E; Y( b& q- H改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
- j* i- C' V" f7 v& e! f- y+ ?- O40. Each form ofshavingsfriends has its advantages. 改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
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