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[托福写作] 考生写作必备:常见病句分析(五)

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发表于 2012-8-14 23:46:10 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up. 改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply.
7 }: c" j$ M, [" w0 P# m42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor. % o8 n% n0 g5 R; H; j
改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
! R, A" X- j6 H43. They will learn the bad habits.
. ]- Y/ P9 w/ U1 G' v改进: They will develop bad habits. $ b2 [* b0 F: {3 Z1 j5 k& R
44. In this continued process, people make progress.
6 _. X: L6 _2 v- ]$ r6 q改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
5 @, K/ H0 q/ H* V' R/ }45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
: W$ i7 b: g/ ?# |9 y0 q改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary. 3 @" B6 T+ o4 o+ @9 l
46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency. ; x2 n7 v& n# k  I2 v, `
改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
" f; p1 w5 X5 b  t8 o+ v47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
4 m& c3 _" [" h2 ]" L改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result. * S2 m( j4 N$ [, S: ?$ M! n
48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.   R, ?! o9 O0 g; t" _& ^2 [+ W
改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream. ) y9 c$ b6 h2 ?7 O" k
49. Children should be taught disciplines insgroupsto avoid unnecessary lost.
$ g) T% v1 H" d改进: Children should be taught discipline insgroupsto avoid unnecessary loss. 5 w5 q7 _, K$ A1 i% @* A# M) X
50. I felt alone.
0 `" ~6 @$ o/ i3 j改进: I felt lonely
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