考生写作必备：常见病句分析（五）

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41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up. 改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply.
42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
! \9 E9 o  h0 c( S9 \+ v43. They will learn the bad habits.
5 a5 ]. p7 q# g! ^改进: They will develop bad habits.
' |1 |$ R! Y; l0 Z2 u5 {- L8 @1 e  y44. In this continued process, people make progress.
  n8 P4 T2 I& f) k# a改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
  w) i$ v9 [% q( v6 S2 w9 D6 z45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
% O% H& w( y8 H8 G46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
# G" X, o: l% Z+ O1 r48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
+ {! }! L# @# {7 a# G/ N) E49. Children should be taught disciplines insgroupsto avoid unnecessary lost.
- M+ @0 z# Q0 L8 v6 y6 ^改进: Children should be taught discipline insgroupsto avoid unnecessary loss.
50. I felt alone.
改进: I felt lonely