累赘(Redundancy)言以简洁为贵。写句子没有一个多余的词;写段落没有一个无必要的句子。能用单词的不用词组;能用词组的不用从句或句子。如: # l8 u2 a+ Z/ T( `3 G, m7 U
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In spite of the fact that he is lazy, I like him。
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本句的“the fact that he is lazy”系同谓语从句,我们按照上述“能用词组的不用从句”可以改为:In spite of his laziness, I like him。
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9 H, a" I/ H2 N2 z) ?" F 例1. For the people who are diligent and kind, money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need。
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剖析:整个句子可以大大简化。
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Diligent, caring people use money only to buy what they need。
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7 W9 t4 L2 z+ ~不连贯(Incoherence)不连贯是指一个句子前言不对后语,或是结构上不畅通。这也是考生常犯的毛病。
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例1. The fresh water, it is the most important things of the earth。 8 a+ Y9 o q% `; |; L# K5 G
- x6 X2 J( |; E: V9 q L 剖析:The fresh water 与逗号后的it 不连贯。It 与things 在数方面不一致。
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Fresh water is the most important thing in the world。
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% Y0 ]5 x, E! x 综合性语言错误(Comprehensive Misusage)所谓“综合性语言错误”,是指除了上述十种错误以外,还有诸如时态,语态,标点符号,大小写等方面的错误。 : q0 A8 j1 X, f% _9 k9 K' V
1 _( i K1 ]( Q6 N# T 例1.Today, Money to everybody is very importance, our’s eat, cloth, live, go etc。 |