托福写作：新托福写作中常见的病句（下）

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11. I was admitted to a Key University for which few dared to sign up. 　　改进: I was admitted to a Key University to which few dared to apply.
6 [* p; j7 I5 [, @2 O8 R6 c: }　　12. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
　　13. They will learn the bad habits.
　　改进: They will develop bad habits.
" L4 c) h2 r+ k  K　　14. In this continued process, people make progress.
　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
: b2 C- P' b0 ^' `: c. E　　15. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
2 T  g( }! i( z　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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　　16. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
　　17. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
; ?' P/ s& x' G3 U9 {" J8 R　　18. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
　　19. Children should be taught disciplines in groups to avoid unnecessary lost.
" H* a( v, `# @+ F5 i* F　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in groups to avoid unnecessary loss.
　　20. I felt alone.
3 [. K) d& j! i' D" T5 G　　21. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
. D$ n. m  f/ c" W　　22. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
6 r6 g' J6 q, O3 s　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
　　23. What’s about nonsmokers?
+ P- z+ b/ @. I0 f) w' Q: r( w　　改进: What about nonsmokers?
5 g3 F* t( ]- H8 e: D% F　　24. Why not to be a non-smoker?
0 j2 m9 v& r* B7 H* @　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
% {/ [: i# P( u: I　　25. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
) T  E0 b# x: A5 Y: f1 y　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.