托福写作：新托福写作中常见的病句（下）

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11. I was admitted to a Key University for which few dared to sign up. 　　改进: I was admitted to a Key University to which few dared to apply.
: X+ m' b1 X3 s# z& f　　12. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
! b) M+ [; r' n' F　　13. They will learn the bad habits.
9 c  \. _/ n8 I; Y! ?, C　　改进: They will develop bad habits.
　　14. In this continued process, people make progress.
　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
　　15. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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　　16. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
0 l  k9 R+ A/ c6 F1 p　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
　　17. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
9 R' }7 _- w/ ^　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
- x. q: r: L4 G5 b( ?& G　　18. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
/ n3 c) P& n( E3 D1 Z9 {" D　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
/ h! c; V- P! a/ }4 i, F  |( s　　19. Children should be taught disciplines in groups to avoid unnecessary lost.
　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in groups to avoid unnecessary loss.
9 T7 s6 w; X: |7 t3 b　　20. I felt alone.
　　21. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
. ?: N+ l5 x* a# [. x% d8 l/ }0 D　　22. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
( F8 f: V/ ]2 u. B' q+ c$ z" v　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
　　23. What’s about nonsmokers?
1 d8 d2 n/ d; e  B5 P3 z　　改进: What about nonsmokers?
　　24. Why not to be a non-smoker?
　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
0 @# H# S+ n4 C, V( B& O$ a　　25. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.