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[托福写作] 托福写作:新托福写作中常见的病句(下)

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发表于 2012-8-14 23:46:10 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
11. I was admitted to a Key University for which few dared to sign up.   改进: I was admitted to a Key University to which few dared to apply.
9 l( R  p7 a2 ?  12. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
6 J8 m+ s6 E( z/ u! r/ f  改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.& Q7 N+ E* e2 ?
  13. They will learn the bad habits.0 _1 h) q) z$ R4 L( v1 N  S
  改进: They will develop bad habits.+ p) {6 K8 p( Y: I
  14. In this continued process, people make progress.. c) ~2 L  p$ X$ _
  改进: In this cycle, people make progress.$ o( y# T# ~6 G$ E( o+ I' b
  15. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
0 |# \: Z1 H7 B3 w% _) h  改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.) q/ [0 e' _- K% {2 _
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/ Q, X+ K- r- f( T  16. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.: i) V2 I7 o& {* }! [6 g; }
  改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
, G. L0 }& r" z( A4 w  17. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
0 \8 @  b6 c2 k$ `: `3 S; @4 f  改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
& {- S: U* e" F/ U7 w  18. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
( d$ Q* x! |% L5 x  改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
+ |2 z+ u6 o" L( L$ m  19. Children should be taught disciplines in groups to avoid unnecessary lost.$ i3 [6 _; D) Y) o
  改进: Children should be taught discipline in groups to avoid unnecessary loss.5 z; ]( H+ E7 `) W% y( b
  20. I felt alone.5 G8 ^* M( @7 S6 J
  21. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.+ `* K/ ]/ e- g9 c) r4 |3 M4 e
  改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.4 d4 u* a+ n+ \% X. e" A
  22. Smoking can help you relax your mind.- M% r( c" U1 g
  改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.4 Q. o8 N3 I; M# i, t6 Q1 b
  23. What’s about nonsmokers?
) \! G4 |! h& W5 q0 M! O* \( K  改进: What about nonsmokers?
4 W8 M" ^0 P9 H6 }; }1 ?; Z  24. Why not to be a non-smoker?* R. S. }# Y5 m8 n5 d
  改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
0 a' m, j5 h" Q0 s' p  25. Everyone will have many friends in his life.# w9 V; [; t4 z+ x3 A
  改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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