11. I was admitted to a Key University for which few dared to sign up. 改进: I was admitted to a Key University to which few dared to apply.
7 m" g% N6 m" e. Z; X( t 12. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.5 [; X* i: g" `- d5 |2 u I
改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
4 a; s: F# I( G1 i* y' J1 w 13. They will learn the bad habits.- X+ j1 e* x2 ^8 k( ~% O
改进: They will develop bad habits.3 a' s/ w; ]" A
14. In this continued process, people make progress.; p/ u7 S. ~9 E
改进: In this cycle, people make progress.4 p; u3 T& z; L; P
15. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
, O# p4 X2 s6 J 改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary. \ X$ A# B2 V$ v9 T& v
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16. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
7 k$ q1 g+ |' v, G2 t 改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.% H; K) H) A7 Y9 p; o
17. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
9 ~0 \) H4 |# v' q4 D/ \- }' \- x 改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result." H, ^, d' @) V) q) Q! t
18. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
& K. E; H! o+ I" u* x" S# ~# M( ~4 v w 改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
! K/ H$ E* n$ Z 19. Children should be taught disciplines in groups to avoid unnecessary lost.
* N/ P- y3 j2 m2 S4 L9 |6 @8 y 改进: Children should be taught discipline in groups to avoid unnecessary loss.- p: W3 k, S8 ?6 Y
20. I felt alone.
, W9 _8 k, E! g, @ 21. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.3 w- i9 v# Q H' @. t
改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
- {: L1 k: b2 F% v 22. Smoking can help you relax your mind.0 S& Z- q6 z' s- y
改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.$ ]& Q+ M$ E0 U) }0 M7 x
23. What’s about nonsmokers?3 n4 i1 ?4 J3 I1 w1 G
改进: What about nonsmokers? |( F" w4 |# @$ ?( u. M% {
24. Why not to be a non-smoker?
. n, v$ G4 B* | 改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
7 ?. [. h; V" F! P' [1 _$ p* P 25. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
7 o' Z0 k: Y3 Q& x- m2 ] 改进: Everyone has friends in his life. |
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