托福写作：新托福写作中常见的病句（下）

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11. I was admitted to a Key University for which few dared to sign up. 　　改进: I was admitted to a Key University to which few dared to apply.
　　12. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
+ W: h, J  r* G9 T5 I( I8 P　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
　　13. They will learn the bad habits.
　　改进: They will develop bad habits.
　　14. In this continued process, people make progress.
: `+ \) j. u7 E- i1 R4 C　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
# m$ Q- M7 R5 j# x  N1 A9 Q　　15. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
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　　16. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
  x# q! `* K/ i- Z. m* J6 [　　17. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
( j9 ^' [9 `% h- Q) f5 \2 b* X: U　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
　　18. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
/ `% S+ w. S2 s% ^8 g6 a- e- B　　19. Children should be taught disciplines in groups to avoid unnecessary lost.
9 h# q% w* ^. n　　改进: Children should be taught discipline in groups to avoid unnecessary loss.
　　20. I felt alone.
! }1 q, R0 D4 l　　21. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
　　22. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
0 S; L/ v& G' ]0 b+ E/ c# x, r　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
! @+ w! ^6 @4 q4 u& j( f( Y5 Y- Y　　23. What’s about nonsmokers?
　　改进: What about nonsmokers?
　　24. Why not to be a non-smoker?
　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
　　25. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
# v/ E( i4 F: c9 s, S" D　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.