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[托福写作] 托福写作:新托福写作中常见的病句(下)

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发表于 2012-8-14 23:46:10 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
11. I was admitted to a Key University for which few dared to sign up.   改进: I was admitted to a Key University to which few dared to apply.3 ?- N- m% }9 o( @
  12. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.; ]) K0 G# w1 p; p/ E. y% A' d
  改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.( _4 d7 u+ }' e* X
  13. They will learn the bad habits.' \7 d) v+ V2 l5 V0 |& [4 x
  改进: They will develop bad habits.- M3 ^! ^7 V8 R7 s
  14. In this continued process, people make progress.
" m; Y9 b& H, d. e% I  改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
1 ]* K7 d3 r# f  15. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.4 M+ j5 P: X; l4 s4 h* Z/ p
  改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.2 f2 K6 s/ Y) P5 Q3 N& ~6 \
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5 D% G. T1 e/ ~; [' O, p3 x% O  16. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
9 i) e- z3 R/ A7 M3 j7 o' y  改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
- W. ~. T* F1 g% b$ M% W) ?  17. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
0 Q" F- K" H* k& p6 @% w( [. v  改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.) H% p' |/ }; v8 }4 \% \
  18. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
" F9 i+ k! s. d; |$ g  改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.9 Y9 o% Z$ ]% q4 }6 h2 B0 T
  19. Children should be taught disciplines in groups to avoid unnecessary lost.: {+ m; A2 W  Y8 X  m+ W2 J
  改进: Children should be taught discipline in groups to avoid unnecessary loss.9 ]' U0 V3 t4 g* O0 {2 _# L
  20. I felt alone.& H/ I2 r" ?: y3 [$ \
  21. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
0 W5 P/ g  ]6 a& }$ h  改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
% q* Q% \: L5 l2 q  22. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
3 _: z5 d* ^9 ^1 @2 h2 R$ C( {2 ?3 X  改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.4 d- Z1 @/ ^0 @  S3 l# ?
  23. What’s about nonsmokers?
2 K0 e& |9 K, R$ {! q+ Y  改进: What about nonsmokers?
0 ^( S3 ?. W1 D& H, T  24. Why not to be a non-smoker?
$ C" [6 D5 Q4 H) E: F# h" @  改进: Why not be a non-smoker?, Q) Q$ \& p! G  U2 e
  25. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
0 b3 z3 {4 f" ?9 Z# i  改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
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