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[托福写作] 历年托福考生优秀范文155篇七十一

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发表于 2012-8-14 23:46:10 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
I am from Arroz e Feijao, a small town in the northeast of Brazil. Building a factory in there will  . V; c$ b7 M" C! h4 h/ a
bring a lot of advantages and disadvantages, but I believe that Arroz e Feijao will mostly benefit  " x7 `; J+ X, o2 }
from the building of a new factory because it is largely populated by poor people and the factory  7 ^7 k& V$ r9 D7 w1 n# O, N' U
would bring many benefits to this small town. However, of course, a factory has disadvantages as  4 _: i, h0 F0 j
well.  , D) |# E9 }1 i# u* l( z2 G
  
; h' Y1 L5 c3 |9 L. n' b- `( H3 K& zAs you know, factories usually bring pollution. If this factory is not managed very effectively and  * r" e! L$ N2 F( n/ `" i
efficiently according to specific rules, it’s prone to polluting the local air and water. What’s more,  3 Y5 }, l9 l) {& G; c2 P
factories usually make noise. Beside clean drinkable water and fresh air, an ideal community  
  q, N6 F) ?- C( u/ n6 d% }" p: vshould be quiet. If the factory cannot maintain this situation to the community, it will not last long.  
( X. U4 u! K; d& \" x* R" w% fA factory that is too noisy or pollutes too much will eventually be relocated to a new area.  
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2 ?$ g7 |; A* }; HOn the other hand, a factory could bring a lot of benefits to the community. So I would support the plan to build a factory to my community for all the reasons I will describe below.  ! x2 n# Z. H; T. \
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First of all, the factory’s construction will surely improve the local infrastructure. To run smoothly,  
( {$ Q/ N* y# N( |0 j! Nthe factory will have to have a steady, reliable supply of water and electricity. Some old pipes will  
" r* k# g* L. t0 _1 Y$ S9 y4 C, V$ Vbe changed, and some facilities will be renovated. The residents’ living standard get improved as a  
. q- p2 v/ ]% ^# k) ?7 F  Zresult of these widespread changes, an important benefit in Arroz e Feijao, where many people do not have access to clean water.  4 S+ `4 }, j: C- G  Z- H) \
Secondly, to make the employee commute more convenient, the local roads will have to be rebuilt  
! c0 q+ J! V  g  dand broadened, resulting in improved public transportation. The town’s residents can take a public  
( x/ b, T- L& Y: d* }  G! hbus to go shopping or go to work. As a result, air pollution and fuel consumption might be  6 w# k: G. H  {. C% T$ D
reduced.  7 e' G( C+ Q, E$ C9 d
Most important, a factory’s establishment will bring up a lot of employment opportunities for the  ; S& I3 h. J# ^* G' Q0 I
community. A factory need experts from various fields. The residents can take just a few minutes  
0 z: d2 }3 J+ G5 J- d3 Xto go to the factory to work. So, the local residents can get great benefits from this factory.  * A, K) N+ h/ }% r# M# ~
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Generally speaking, I agree with the plan to build a factory near my community. If the factory can be managed successfully, the factory and local residents can have mutual benefit.
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