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[托福写作] 历年托福考生优秀范文155篇七十一

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发表于 2012-8-14 23:46:10 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
I am from Arroz e Feijao, a small town in the northeast of Brazil. Building a factory in there will  & W; q& s) _- D$ R  J, H+ J/ p
bring a lot of advantages and disadvantages, but I believe that Arroz e Feijao will mostly benefit  9 P) V, V$ l: {* m9 l% i
from the building of a new factory because it is largely populated by poor people and the factory  7 b& `6 T+ x) {+ a  K  S2 \1 U
would bring many benefits to this small town. However, of course, a factory has disadvantages as  
# t6 {$ R" X1 X1 f4 |. M) Qwell.  
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As you know, factories usually bring pollution. If this factory is not managed very effectively and  ! i: @* v, ?  O3 D
efficiently according to specific rules, it’s prone to polluting the local air and water. What’s more,  
- ?& H- |% C5 X, ^' N5 sfactories usually make noise. Beside clean drinkable water and fresh air, an ideal community  
- Q0 d  s0 x& G$ G4 W% q4 wshould be quiet. If the factory cannot maintain this situation to the community, it will not last long.  
$ \" E. n/ u: h9 p. eA factory that is too noisy or pollutes too much will eventually be relocated to a new area.  
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On the other hand, a factory could bring a lot of benefits to the community. So I would support the plan to build a factory to my community for all the reasons I will describe below.  
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" l6 c2 g5 a2 p  lFirst of all, the factory’s construction will surely improve the local infrastructure. To run smoothly,  6 X. ^( m: V) X! u4 g
the factory will have to have a steady, reliable supply of water and electricity. Some old pipes will    O2 ~# e6 f! f- e2 ^. Z* K
be changed, and some facilities will be renovated. The residents’ living standard get improved as a  
# P$ A$ h/ R7 k  yresult of these widespread changes, an important benefit in Arroz e Feijao, where many people do not have access to clean water.  2 O  z7 P$ A9 H% Q8 R
Secondly, to make the employee commute more convenient, the local roads will have to be rebuilt  2 J5 |; q+ Z1 Y& p9 U& v
and broadened, resulting in improved public transportation. The town’s residents can take a public  # o& w. L1 j* H: d$ o4 }  _- Y
bus to go shopping or go to work. As a result, air pollution and fuel consumption might be  
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Most important, a factory’s establishment will bring up a lot of employment opportunities for the  
+ z9 Z. D; S6 A% zcommunity. A factory need experts from various fields. The residents can take just a few minutes  
4 n9 \( ^7 {9 m9 c; Tto go to the factory to work. So, the local residents can get great benefits from this factory.  5 d6 L- V! G8 }  V3 x
  
, R" u! P3 N! C) a: h" LGenerally speaking, I agree with the plan to build a factory near my community. If the factory can be managed successfully, the factory and local residents can have mutual benefit.
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