写作常见50个病句分析(2)

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　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
0 w' ^  U' b( |4 v8 ]　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
2 Z4 u0 [3 l" C　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
" ?* d1 e+ c' u$ J/ g; G$ _' X　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
# h/ h2 k+ L! s! K5 q　　28. What's about nonsmokers?
3 ]0 e0 L7 O) d7 _  U* W　　改进: What about nonsmokers?
& S+ A3 T# P7 N) F　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
8 a; A, x$ t* h; A' J　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
$ Z6 I+ }) F0 }8 ]6 _  z　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
( n+ I$ n; ]0 T, C　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
  q  e8 G8 o% L& @1 C+ c, ?　　31. I am not good at maths, but English
　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
" d0 J8 S6 B7 E' T　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
) q" Z5 y4 X+ J! d) a' p. X' |/ f　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
　　34. I agree the latter idea.
- l4 `) o, f8 T/ s8 Y. \　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.
5 E$ a* I3 X6 w　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
& i% O5 n7 f" N/ Y　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
$ `$ M) S8 X! q$ n/ {- ^　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
; c. Z; O; s, ~2 @% q; G" R* ^7 L　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
　　38. No one knows all the things.
5 l5 r6 Y% J  t5 q7 K　　改进: No one knows everything.
# a9 W6 @$ Z2 P- v　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
  j# p. I/ h3 b' a' J% e0 k　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
- r7 ^  ~  A; F# D; Y& g6 |  p　　40. Each form ofshavingsfriends has its advantages.
　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
' J/ V5 \9 k$ m* C3 j, Z: ^　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply.
　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
　　43. They will learn the bad habits.
　　改进: They will develop bad habits.
/ v( l3 U; L( U1 q9 c& {& k　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.
3 k% ~. z6 ^/ J- @# Y+ v　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
3 Y+ y% ^7 {& t$ z1 k) y+ X　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
0 W# Q! v) l7 Z0 K5 O; v0 I1 ^　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
/ K( ?; _4 v+ I2 A　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
. P( ?; u# K; T5 D$ z4 i1 e　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
2 x1 {% g" u' y7 {5 n; S　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
　　49. Children should be taught disciplines insgroupsto avoid unnecessary lost.
2 ~; S' B9 {  z; @4 f　　改进: Children should be taught discipline insgroupsto avoid unnecessary loss.
　　50. I felt alone.
　　改进: I felt lonely.