写作常见50个病句分析(2)

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　　26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
/ Y- ^; T. Q0 }3 \' k( J' Z　　改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
　　27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
　　改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
　　28. What's about nonsmokers?
　　改进: What about nonsmokers?
, V- N/ @, M. y6 r9 _　　29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
　　改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
　　30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
　　改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
2 i  \# A( H( i& A( j3 K　　31. I am not good at maths, but English
: \9 A1 r, M* s8 Y1 B+ r/ `　　改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
　　32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
  l9 j& n, s0 N! x! v5 |- r% T4 J　　改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
　　33.It is children who clear about their interests.
+ S9 Z( m. E' F. U. E4 t　　改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
2 D, t  u9 d" Y! Q　　34. I agree the latter idea.
) p. o9 \5 s* X" \　　改进: I agree with the latter idea.
7 x! X( T7 Q5 ^1 M! n+ C8 ^0 l　　35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
　　改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
　　36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
　　改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
　　37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
　　改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
9 r* a# M& x8 m) v$ y' `4 `! i  Z　　38. No one knows all the things.
　　改进: No one knows everything.
  I$ s5 U! x! b% m, k3 X　　39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
2 p# J/ M3 K; g& [　　改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
5 D0 Y. j) `5 [! u1 h' K1 U2 P* R5 {　　40. Each form ofshavingsfriends has its advantages.
) ~  e; j) s+ M& j1 A$ A& J　　改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
　　41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
　　改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply.
& |: j7 Q) C2 h  g# a2 t- `　　42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
　　改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
　　43. They will learn the bad habits.
1 E" v& \/ p/ i# `6 L$ n　　改进: They will develop bad habits.
　　44. In this continued process, people make progress.
! ]; _* ~, F! u# X' e　　改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
　　45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
# X) k' _5 }" ~' j! I+ @　　改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
　　46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
5 x4 `3 P6 U9 i! R　　改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
" H+ X0 k1 [, |* m1 R　　47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
　　改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
8 \* y% V: ]! h8 ]5 x0 b; {, B　　48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
　　改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
　　49. Children should be taught disciplines insgroupsto avoid unnecessary lost.
# L' ~  d0 F, w6 H　　改进: Children should be taught discipline insgroupsto avoid unnecessary loss.
　　50. I felt alone.
& X3 ~. O' L" T* v" }% P　　改进: I felt lonely.