结构不平行
/ s% j8 J3 u% S/ _3 Q5 |9 H3 x2 ^4 I 例：I was able to raise my TOEFL score by studying hard and I read lots of books.6 P& @5 K$ O5 }; N. x
当使用连词将一系列的单词联接起来的时候，应当使用词性相同或同一类型的短语。
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' w! \" X7 b% b. _% [" w( H 例：Many companies began using computers mouth.
5 {6 B( z* o4 }( j 段落过长，不分段' h5 K/ _+ t2 T3 [9 q" d* Y. S
主语与动词一致问题
' {: C2 L' e# {9 A6 S She are a good friend of mine that I has known for a long time.% I+ M& C+ v9 ?' ~1 m2 F
主语和动词在数方面不一致。3 x& M% [% C+ z1 _& a) k6 v
句子别扭8 B$ f2 m* `* m" H" K" b6 ~
We heated the soup in the microwave for too long and the shape of the container changed.
% N; n' u$ a3 H5 I9 z5 Q 措辞过长或不清。换言之，句子显得滑稽可笑。
5 d3 n% b6 [0 L* { 不要使用缩写9 L3 ^, ?' @0 E2 C
在正式的写作中不要使用缩写形式(can't， don't， it's， we'll， they've等等) ，而应当使用单词的完整形式 (cannot， do not，it is，we will，they have等等)。
I r) G9 h& @* R ]' K: c 关联词语重复0 m4 A/ V; z! x( O, s' L
Since I want to go to a good school, therefore I am trying to raise my test scores.
4 I% a, t' m# z) s 不能在该句的主要主语和主要动词前使用连词。
: N, `1 U/ m, _) { 句子不完整
) E0 @5 j* l. E( @ e" E7 l- E Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. For example, my friend in high school.
. @( c! W$ j6 z4 M6 z" W 句子没有主要主语或主要动词，因为其实它应是一个从句。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。
9 M8 O5 _: s1 M3 f9 A' g) |1 e' ?" z 不要使用get# _6 L$ H3 \% s" o( [+ K
When I got home, I got tired, so I got a book and got into bed.* P: D$ j: j* `
Get太不正式，意思也过于含糊，不适合用在正式的场合。应将get改为一个更加具体的单词，如become, receive, find, achieve, 等等。+ { N, ]9 t2 \
书写难以辨认4 ]) j' ^+ W' l# Q. S/ h. I
信息不正确
$ W0 A. r' E& @6 u, a: F I would like to study in America because all modern technology originated there.: K! ]- o4 f/ A& t$ W0 V1 @+ _
传的信息不正确，或者让人听起来觉得可能不正确（如果确实是正确的，应当解释为什么这样，因为读者不认为是正确的）。上述例句中，all的意思是百分之百；我们不能绝对地说每一件新东西都是从美国诞生的。为保险起见，应当使用many或most。
/ ?$ j0 `0 O6 t' F8 Q7 l4 {( S 非英语单词+ A( }, U& O+ y7 R. g, h
Computers are very helpful and advantageable.& ^/ u: U' w5 A! N
尽管看起来象个单词，其实不是，至少不是个英文单词。使用这个单词的另一种形式。
- ` m! q+ I5 D8 i 介词多余7 v7 }/ D- L7 R" a, Q. \
I would like to discuss about something important that you mentioned about to me during yesterday.# b, ^4 N3 U2 Y, K4 t+ I- C7 D
We went to downtown yesterday to buy a watch.. h- B3 U; m0 }/ G6 ^' k: i
When I first came to the US, I did not have a lot of friends in here.% d" z. a$ S8 z2 |1 V
In class, my classmate never mentioned about her husband.) I5 N! \2 l* g$ n9 W/ b: g
在表示这种意思时此单词不能与介词连用。这种情况常见于downtown，home，there，here等词。这些词语在英语中是副词而非名词，因而不能在它们前面添加介词。
5 |0 F" M) i: f 跑题或不相关
- {2 j4 G* `% ~# r; K) Z# L; p3 n There are many reasons to buy a car, preferably a nice car.; X/ K, F" d U; Y6 c
这个意思与文章的主题无关。7 a: T( a( Y1 n3 U& |" [3 W/ I, O+ {
陈词滥调
( e3 V+ D' F' P+ a) [5 e It is okay for children to fail sometimes.
: Y9 p$ {$ q; K2 c( ?$ Y 所表达的意思很普通 大多数人都已经知道到了，因而就没有必要再说出来。
6 P' z" f( P) x0 p 标点问题- |% l% W5 m2 a Z3 f9 Y% R5 k. Z
I love animals. and I like to help them. because they are helpless. so I want to become a vet.
: i3 }" ?- ^0 w; D) v0 Y/ H 这是一个非常普遍的问题！许多学生在句子中使用了太多的句号，尤其是当他们用手写的时候。; b& C) n8 K7 s
重复冗余
& `/ T! \7 K) u& U) G$ [ D, p" Q Personally, I believe what the newspaper prints.- e+ _* ?2 w2 o) Y" w+ x
一种意思的表述不止一次，或者某个词语不必要。
8 R) A2 g$ t8 v$ C 单数/复数! g4 v; ^' J4 W3 P+ W, {
Many year ago, dinosaur roamed the Earths.
5 u! q: i% |) T/ |& H: W' ]7 | 单词需要从单数变为复数，或者由复数变成单数。
$ v; ?# G7 ]' D6 |! W+ x( z 单数可数名词7 N k2 a. Q9 G- `; e8 u
单数可数名词不能单独使用，应该将其变为复数形式或者加上限定词（a, the, my, his, her, Gary's, no, any, 1, 3, 50, most,等等）。
3 G9 x4 n$ V' T; X" A7 Y 拼写错误7 ]$ h( @( R4 f) m9 C* S
主语、动词或宾语有问题
5 o" p7 P0 O6 X1 U4 w' A6 ` I want to buy something for my mother that she will like it.0 g( Y( C' Q: T7 S. `
There was a terrible accident happen yesterday.
# F9 Q$ G$ D M# d4 F( R9 Y- z 句子的基本结构有问题 缺少主语、动词或宾语，或者这些成分重复。
4 l) u5 F' }2 x! Z7 ~4 y! F 语气与文章不符" K: K @; q# g9 ~/ b1 Y: H
I was kind of mad at the guy who vociferated angry words at me.
n. ]9 n) N/ e* ?# A I have heard many wonderful things about such cosmopolitan cities as Paris, London, Tokyo, and Hong Kong and I would love to visit these cities to check them out.+ I8 w( |' F; a" d, \2 y7 h3 r
语气与文章其他部分不相符 可能是过于正式或者太不正式。, P- V* R* h& f Z. j+ Y e; h: r
代词指代不明5 z5 Q% l9 v% X; h
If people do not speak the same language, it has a greater chance of miscommunication.
/ D# N# J( O/ B8 x, J9 s( I* o I intend to complete my studies in the United States because they have good programs there.
/ Y; ^ I, }" O( D 代词所指代的指示词（介词所代替的名词）不清楚。
3 @/ Q9 f# b5 e( R7 M% i 过于笼统/ Y' [$ N4 R( z" u2 S- E, T
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