作文常见错误简析

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　　结构不平行
　　例：I was able to raise my TOEFL score by studying hard and I read lots of books.
& @4 b3 o$ h5 \% U　　当使用连词将一系列的单词联接起来的时候，应当使用词性相同或同一类型的短语。
5 V) s; G4 ^' b. ^　　不知所云
　　例：Many companies began using computers mouth.
. b' O4 n6 b) d+ N. f/ A　　段落过长，不分段
! Q9 B' ?+ P1 L* Z/ l- w3 f: g　　主语与动词一致问题
　　She are a good friend of mine that I has known for a long time.
　　主语和动词在数方面不一致。
! x- Q* _/ @- a1 R8 ]　　句子别扭
　　We heated the soup in the microwave for too long and the shape of the container changed.
' ^* A0 R1 B% K/ X5 d　　措辞过长或不清。换言之，句子显得滑稽可笑。
2 _. y% e( l7 B" O+ T8 D; b　　不要使用缩写
% L9 C" t! Q  U- h. n4 @+ Q　　在正式的写作中不要使用缩写形式(can't， don't， it's， we'll， they've等等) ，而应当使用单词的完整形式 (cannot， do not，it is，we will，they have等等)。
　　关联词语重复
　　Since I want to go to a good school, therefore I am trying to raise my test scores.
/ l, P2 Z% K6 L6 \9 I　　不能在该句的主要主语和主要动词前使用连词。
　　句子不完整
3 D% j/ [' w% R　　Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. For example, my friend in high school.
　　句子没有主要主语或主要动词，因为其实它应是一个从句。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。
　　不要使用get
　　When I got home, I got tired, so I got a book and got into bed.
/ S3 U! h/ m; u1 s( N　　Get太不正式，意思也过于含糊，不适合用在正式的场合。应将get改为一个更加具体的单词，如become, receive, find, achieve, 等等。
& c' H' D9 }( A) k7 A( V# e* q0 n. w　　书写难以辨认
; G& q9 h* m5 k$ J2 t　　信息不正确
　　I would like to study in America because all modern technology originated there.
- U# u  |4 k' b) k- i. s1 L　　传的信息不正确，或者让人听起来觉得可能不正确（如果确实是正确的，应当解释为什么这样，因为读者不认为是正确的）。上述例句中，all的意思是百分之百；我们不能绝对地说每一件新东西都是从美国诞生的。为保险起见，应当使用many或most。
　　非英语单词
　　Computers are very helpful and advantageable.
　　尽管看起来象个单词，其实不是，至少不是个英文单词。使用这个单词的另一种形式。
4 f8 y: @% Z$ `) o9 \7 w　　介词多余
　　I would like to discuss about something important that you mentioned about to me during yesterday.
　　We went to downtown yesterday to buy a watch.
& Z+ w# P$ F3 ?　　When I first came to the US, I did not have a lot of friends in here.
　　In class, my classmate never mentioned about her husband.
　　在表示这种意思时此单词不能与介词连用。这种情况常见于downtown，home，there，here等词。这些词语在英语中是副词而非名词，因而不能在它们前面添加介词。
　　跑题或不相关
" y# ]6 T! V/ O3 M( q6 A" l! E　　There are many reasons to buy a car, preferably a nice car.
' d7 W# A+ {, S　　这个意思与文章的主题无关。
, ~7 f1 X8 b: ^　　陈词滥调
- l, l  I! _; a# C　　It is okay for children to fail sometimes.
　　所表达的意思很普通 大多数人都已经知道到了，因而就没有必要再说出来。
　　标点问题
　　I love animals. and I like to help them. because they are helpless. so I want to become a vet.
　　这是一个非常普遍的问题！许多学生在句子中使用了太多的句号，尤其是当他们用手写的时候。
# e* }6 ^# y/ w. n$ C; V　　重复冗余
　　Personally, I believe what the newspaper prints.
2 e+ N! B7 u0 `　　一种意思的表述不止一次，或者某个词语不必要。
　　单数/复数
4 u- x8 N0 O- E　　Many year ago, dinosaur roamed the Earths.
　　单词需要从单数变为复数，或者由复数变成单数。
4 c/ q7 {1 }5 ~7 _! v) u: e　　单数可数名词
  Z4 R% }& Z# z9 l4 [8 B5 M1 q　　单数可数名词不能单独使用，应该将其变为复数形式或者加上限定词（a, the, my, his, her, Gary's, no, any, 1, 3, 50, most,等等）。
　　拼写错误
　　主语、动词或宾语有问题
　　I want to buy something for my mother that she will like it.
　　There was a terrible accident happen yesterday.
! B) o9 t, f, o- u* i3 ^　　句子的基本结构有问题 　缺少主语、动词或宾语，或者这些成分重复。
+ j+ {7 P; ^$ n7 E　　语气与文章不符
/ Y+ v5 X2 @) X, y　　I was kind of mad at the guy who vociferated angry words at me.
1 K4 I: e3 b9 @' v+ r) p8 e　　I have heard many wonderful things about such cosmopolitan cities as Paris, London, Tokyo, and Hong Kong and I would love to visit these cities to check them out.
　　语气与文章其他部分不相符 可能是过于正式或者太不正式。
7 ]- n3 ]! E6 m0 R: G　　代词指代不明
/ [3 R! t5 M2 z9 {5 d9 R　　If people do not speak the same language, it has a greater chance of miscommunication.
　　I intend to complete my studies in the United States because they have good programs there.
* W2 t* Y7 H& t  k. R9 q# f& k2 x　　代词所指代的指示词（介词所代替的名词）不清楚。
　　过于笼统

　　We should use our resources on Earth because the Earth is getting worse.

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</p>　　句子或它所表达的意思过于笼统，不能提供多少信息。
　　动词时态错误
　　Yesterday I will go to the store because tomorrow I needed some food.
　　动词时态不正确 检查一下是应该用现在时、过去时、将来时还是完成时等等。
! }4 r- a5 s/ u7 N8 p7 P. {　　选词不恰当
　　I was late getting home because I lost my way.
. h. i' J$ f4 [  O3 |5 J( G　　在这种情况下不应该使用该词 可选择更好的词语或者所使用的词语与文章的总体语气不符。
- B" _, Q# S2 {" ]1 f7 q　　单词形式不当
　　I want to creation a great web site so that I can becoming wealth.
5 Q: P, S# ?& l( t/ p6 P% p　　所使用的单词的形式不正确 检查一下应该使用该词的名词、形容词或副词形式的哪一种。
+ p# V( j1 v8 s  u; Q　　用词错误
　　Even I don't speak Spanish, I was able to find a bathroom in the department store.
　　I gained a lot of pounds during vacation.
; {, f# k0 T) C* {　　用词错误或在此种情况下该词不是最佳用词。