以下是ets公布的所有的issue主题的范文。一共6个题目，每个题目，6篇不同分数的范文。建议大家研读“4-6”分作文。对于1-3分作文，可以看看ets对它的评价，分析其分数低的原因。保证自己不要犯这些错误。有些错误是致命的，比如跑题。
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* i4 c; c# @* ~* D" r- ^; v "Both the development of technological tools and the uses to which humanity has put them have created modern civilizations in which loneliness is ever increasing.": T8 L$ d- B7 ^5 g" l# I
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Technology, broadly defined as the use of tools, has a long history.
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4 ?2 E( ]7 }9 ^# w% f/ N Ever since Erg the caveman first conked an animal with a rock, people have been using technology.! b3 y% L, e3 f
; ^- N K* \* z- ]1 X/ \6 z: L For thousands of years, the use of tools allowed people to move ever closer together.) Z" e6 e& g. Y1 V+ `
+ K+ g B2 {$ Z# r# Y Because fields could be cultivated and the technology to store food existed, people would live in cities rather than in small nomadic tribes.: q) W f0 e3 {' K% ^6 E7 L- l
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Only very lately have Erg's descendants come to question the benefits of technology.# V3 o1 N- r3 t; X( m$ O5 L
/ ?0 ^+ Y. P" D0 i The Industrial Revolution introduced and spread technologies that mechanized many tasks.
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As a result of the drive toward more efficient production and distribution (so the ever larger cities would be supported), people began to act as cogs in the technological machine.
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Clothing was no longer produced by groups of women sewing and gossiping together, but by down-trodden automation's operating machinery in grim factories.
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The benefits of the new technology of today, computers and the internet, are particularly ambiguous.
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: ?, e/ P. u. Q- J" D# p3 _, J They have made work ever more efficient and knit the world together in a web of information and phone lines.& P0 ` t" A- S* N3 ^8 g2 o# F1 R
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Some visionaries speak of a world in which Erg need not check in to his office; he can just dial in from home.
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; e8 s% C L! S3 F He won't need to go to a bar to pick up women because there are all those chat rooms.
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2 P1 Y z6 o; L; j. n Erg orders his groceries from an online delivery service.
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Download a new game.+ r: V, C" v9 C% M: g# F$ ]9 P
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5 H7 }" H, j: z Many people, myself included, are a little queasy about that vision." j% O0 L# Z- Z$ w" z! B
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Are his online friends real friends?
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Does anything count in a spiritual way if it's just digital? |
发表于 2012-8-15 12:52:21
