2012年12月大学英语四级写作技巧（4）
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No: Jane is pretty, with brown hair, and has a graceful manner. & @! V0 S3 u. z9 l0 ^8 \ F0 \$ q
Yes: Jane is pretty, brown-haired, and graceful. 7 B; ^7 J: T: W% m& m
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3 p7 E5 y/ s+ c' s! U2 x No: He left the city because of his lack of success in business, the departure of his friends and because his health deteriorated rapidly.
4 J) H" o: b" b; a Yes: He left the city because of his lack of success in business, the departure of his friends and his rapidly failing health.
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No: They bought the house for location and affordability.
/ {9 Z# z n W% R8 s) j Yes: They bought the house because of its location and its affordability.
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; r: L1 g6 u$ K# \, y; c2 l No: Why did you make Xiao Zhang feel useless and as if he was unimportant?
( Z" p0 c% e; g Yes: Why did you make Xiao Zhang feel useless and unimportant? ' t8 B% @# K5 ~8 V+ g( u
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m% s) }' v+ z3 A, D2 @ No: This could be a problem for both the winners and for those who lose.
7 t& F( `9 E" _) b2 ~8 K Yes: This could be a problem for both the winners and losers.
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_4 k& {( m* j" |+ q4 ` No: The prisoner was not only found guilty of bribery but also adultery.
8 \; C3 V8 x8 A y6 b% |; x Yes: The prisoner was found guilty not only of bribery but also of adultery. |
发表于 2012-8-14 00:48:47
