2012年12月大学英语四级写作技巧（4）
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No: Jane is pretty, with brown hair, and has a graceful manner.
: e0 L0 O# n" m% p* y! } Yes: Jane is pretty, brown-haired, and graceful.
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, G% y- q; q5 r8 u* N1 F No: He left the city because of his lack of success in business, the departure of his friends and because his health deteriorated rapidly. - h& A l- f7 g9 B
Yes: He left the city because of his lack of success in business, the departure of his friends and his rapidly failing health.
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$ l6 W( i* B! P0 r X1 ^- E* _9 ^ No: They bought the house for location and affordability.
: @8 X c+ M! x6 X' ], }5 Q* G Yes: They bought the house because of its location and its affordability. * _7 r$ y3 c- }# g: e: f
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No: Why did you make Xiao Zhang feel useless and as if he was unimportant?
; g2 \' S3 @0 }% t! e, O3 J Yes: Why did you make Xiao Zhang feel useless and unimportant?
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$ t( ]: ^' H: F0 \7 A No: This could be a problem for both the winners and for those who lose.
9 H4 Z( ]! @4 {3 b Yes: This could be a problem for both the winners and losers.
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- j6 E K" ~. X1 W* g& I) z No: The prisoner was not only found guilty of bribery but also adultery.
3 B" a& r% P* I- U( I. F# ]. c Yes: The prisoner was found guilty not only of bribery but also of adultery. |
发表于 2012-8-14 00:48:47
