2012年12月大学英语四级写作技巧指导(12)6 Z( F- S- d: {+ p$ k l& B
Before: A college graduate should file his or her employment application with the human resources department. ! m. d* ~6 q1 @8 |# @4 }9 h$ V0 K
After: An application for employment should be filed with the human resources department. 转自:考试网 - [Examw.Com]% E" ]7 @3 ~( M
※ 解决方法之三是如果你的文章属于指导性文章，则采用第二人称代词。第二人称代词没有性别歧视之嫌。 & f% S, L6 A+ r' V9 [/ |
Before: A college graduate should file his or her employment application with the human resources department. 8 ^3 h6 k6 q# p
After: You should file your employment application with the human resources department. 2 F, i8 }' V) l( `" T- Q2 t
※ 解决方法之四是最后还可以删除所有包括第三人称代词在内的不必要的代词。 - D, f- M& @( H7 H9 r- P: g9 c
Before: A college graduate should file his or her employment application with the human resources department. # z% e/ s( k1 A' \( n9 |% ~6 O
Before: You should file your employment application with the human resources department. ( G& ?# y% _0 a$ O" O7 d/ ^
After: To apply for employment, file an application with the human resources department. |
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