有效的句子要有重点,并且要突出重点。句子的重点可以通过下列方法,加以突出:$ ?, R* u! }/ `8 a" k8 [" U8 R4 G
1. 把重点摆在句首或句尾. 一般而论,最显眼的位置是在“句尾,其次是在句首,中间的位置最平淡,乏善可陈。例如:
& R1 l0 Q& @2 J( L& D6 M% h* x (1).Incorrect grammar and improper construction invariably distract readers' attention.
! V9 V* Q# J4 _+ E: f! r" X) a. u (2) The history of vocabulary is, in many ways, the record of civilization.# p% S3 x R) Y- S- Q3 r
把重点放在句尾是种“吊胃口”的方法,读者或听者非得读完或听完整句不可。+ d7 c5 ]" }4 j+ D+ E# k+ X. t
2. 在复杂句里,把主句放在从句之后.除了名词从句和形容词从句之外,因为它们位置较固定,副词从句中有几种的位置灵活,可以在主句之前出现,也可以跟在主句之后。通常我们就把这样的副词从句提前,重点则放在后头的主句,如:
+ @% `" C) K- {' P- _9 L8 P6 b (3a) I came upon an old classmate when I went to town yesterday.* Z0 P+ \7 `# \6 {7 d" `" t, z
When I went to town yesterday, I came upon an old classmate. N- V. X2 [9 U9 n$ B' G
副词短语更是如此,如 :. M% w! J4 y A4 b
(4a) Steel is commonly used to make knives, razors and other useful tools because of its durability.2 O' X$ m0 n3 P' }
Because of its durability, steel is commonly used to make knives, razors and other useful tools.
& B& y% d; p8 r% _/ V% k, _ 3. 把较重要或有分量的词语放在后头,如和:
$ J% X" Y- ]$ ~# M) D) N P (5a) I was delighted and amused by the classical opera
/ P; Z5 a' R; t) z O T I was amused and delighted by the classical opera.$ [& _7 y) g0 U% K
(6a) That singer's life was tragic and brief.' \( C; C; }/ r% z- Q
That singer's life was brief and tragic.
4 O) i5 p2 `9 B; y! s8 u1 d% S 4. 把句子中一系列的项目作逻辑性的排列。例如:1 b6 Z$ U- V! K3 j6 [6 i, F/ ?
(7) Tony ate his dinner, watched TV, and then went to bed.* y" p0 p! W5 j# h( x
(8) Were you bored with years of study in elementary school, high school and institute of higher education?
1 y1 [7 K, M) J' w2 V 5. 必要时,重复重要的语词或概念。 例如:7 h% q% q J) x7 D
(9) Jackie enjoys the company of ladies. He likes their beauty, he likes their delicacy, he likes their vivacity, and he likes their silence.
; `# @( _% L: t2 @- e (10) ...the land stretched out without names. Nameless headlands split the surf; nameless lakes reflected the nameless mountains and nameless rivers flowed through nameless valleys and nameless bays.6 b, k! d2 Y! x1 {+ g
6. 尽量用主动语态,因此比(11a)好:
m! x+ v C% X* \, A (11a) A pedestrian was struck on the head by a flying stone.4 n0 A) Y7 O% x& B( ^
A flying stone struck a pedestrian on the head.$ k9 j; V1 M/ Q! R
7. 适当时候,可用倒装句和平行句,如:
6 P7 _3 E- P4 H1 z5 f! V6 z* E; x (12) Seven dwarfs lived here in the center of the dark forest. →+ L" ^# `2 l3 D+ ^+ R7 R( i
Here, in the center of the dark forest lived seven dwarfs.
8 Z; {! N8 t( c& k, N1 r& h9 c (13) Severity breeds fear; roughness breeds hatred.& b8 M6 k9 Y2 X7 M2 }3 o' D
(14) Honesty recommends that I speak; self-interest demands that I remain silent. |