六级写作冲刺备考：常见错误分析3

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（六）连词方面的错误
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作文中缺少必要的连词，或错用连词的现象也比较普遍。
. Z; X2 H/ v% @# o6 s（误）One should improve his English，one should overcome difficulties in studies.
（正）If one wants to improve his English，he should overcome difficulties in studies.
  j) J' q; ?( |: ^【说明】学生在写作中往往意识不到连词的重要，不善于使用连词和连接副词来明确标示出因果关系、转折关系、递进关系等。
: I! G; F; s7 j. T4 {& h0 m（七）搭配方面的错误
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学生作文中用词搭配方面的错误也占有较大比例。记得在一次六级作文阅卷中，近千篇作文在表达“上海交通越来越拥挤”这个意思时，几乎没有一篇用 heavier，大多数人用的是The traffic in Shanghai is getting more and more crowded，而traffic是不能与crowded搭配的。
1．（误）However the speed of a car is much faster than that of a bicycle.
（正）However the speed of a car is much higher than that of a bicycle.
* U+ P: l5 W8 B" B! p) u【说明】speed只能和high，low，good，top，normal，fantastic，moderate，surprising等搭配，不能与fast，quick，slow搭配。但可以这样说A car is much faster in speed than a bicycle.
2．（误）In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it.
' P6 x6 r9 _! P# \/ i3 E/ F; i（正）In the past the price of milk was so high that most families couldn’t afford it.
0 F# t0 }0 v, Y7 t8 F3 n/ J3 g【说明】price只和high，low，inflated，moderate，minimum，original，popular，prevailing，published，reduced，reasonable等搭配，不能与expensive，cheap搭配，但可以说In the past，milk was so expensive that most families couldn’t afford it.
1 r3 J9 P! \3 `/ D* F1 l& e  [# [由此可见，要提高对词语搭配的驾驭能力，除了要在平时的阅读过程中多积累，还需要克服中文中诸如“速度快”、“价格贵”、“学习知识”、“人减少”等搭配的影响，避免写出look book或see book这样的笑话来。
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学生作文中对词语的误用也相当普遍，误用词语不仅不能准确地表达作者的意思，而且也会闹出笑话。
1. （误）With the industrious development，there is a great need for different kinds of energy.
5 z$ r8 }8 n+ s4 W6 d（正）With the industrial development，there is a great need for different kinds of energy.
7 R% \& _1 q, `  i) N' W2. （误）Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which effect our daily life.
5 v7 D, R+ s" U* D- a（正）Most big cities are plagued by traffic jams which affect our daily life.
【说明】以上错句都是因为对形容词的辨析不清而造成的。Industrious是“勤劳的”，“工业上的”应为industrial。effect一般用作名词，其动词形式表示“产生、实现”，而这里的意思是“影响”，应换成affect。