2012年12月大学英语六级作文写作技巧(26)

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2012年12月大学英语六级作文写作技巧(26)
" F( x8 T3 p, d, b- D3 e综 合 改错（Errors Correction）：
' m. s! b2 o- L7 a1 ?　　一、语法错误
5 _: V7 s9 w' ?: N4 x; v　　二、词汇错误
　　三、逻辑错误
　　四、多词少词
　　Example:Television is rapidly becoming the literature
; H" A; h! l# ^( i　　of our periods. Many of the arguments 1.time/times/age
　　having used for the study for literature as a 2. /
) k$ |9 z( [7 z) U　　school subject are valid for ∧ study of television. 3. the
7 Z2 U% @' r4 ^8 N4 s7 O7 W4 T　　综 合 改 错（Errors Correction）：
; K" ^( {! R. N# ^: T　　 语法错误
　　1、平行结构(not only...but also\both...and\either...or\and)
　　1) A professor’s salary is higher than a secretary.[secretary’s]
　　2) One of these is informative, interesting, and is easy to understand.[去掉]
, ^' f5 \: f! [6 R3 B  X　　3) Defining a problem is easier than to provide a solution.[providing]
　　2、连词错误
/ D2 i" v1 H& M# _2 m0 x$ ]　　1) Candle will later be replaced by lamp, that could burn longer and lighter. [which]
　　2) The children attended a small elementary school (often of just one room) to that they had to walk every day, possibly for a few miles. [which，that前只能有except和in。except that除此以外；in that因为，体现在]
* C1 g6 i5 j5 F3 M, W　　3) It will be interesting to discover how many young people go to universities without any idea of that they are going to do afterward. [what，what相当于the thing that]
　　4) It appears that we all find company in sound, if we demand a little quiet from time to time. [but或yet]
　　5) They are likely to travel more and to want more education. Nevertheless, many more jobs are available in these services. [Therefore或So]
　　3、分词错误
: g1 F  M. ^$ a　　1) Police’s records show a surprised link between changes in the seasons and crime patterns. [surprising]
+ o2 ?; [$ ]2 O* S( Z6 `　　 2) Deciding how much discomfort and risk we are preparing to put up with in the name of better health is a high personal matter, not a decision we should remain to doctors alone.
7 H- q) \# `/ r: t' i/ U　　3) Even the quiet of our careful protected wilderness areas can be invaded at any moment by a passed jet. [passing]
　　4) So a sportsman’s individual way of walking with raised shoulders is imitated by an admired fan. [admiring]
6 O. j) Q: ^1 T1 d/ N  s; j　　4、指代错误
　　1) A break in their employment, or a decision to work part time, will slow its raises and promotions-because it would for men. [their]
　　2) Clearly some risks worth taking, especially when the rewards are high: a man surrounded by flames and smoke generally considers that jumping out of a second-floor window is an acceptable risk to save its life. [his] 转自:考试网 - [Examw.Com]
　　3) The modern light-house also identifies it in a code known to all ships. [itself]
' P' c7 [5 ]9 d5 {; I. ^: t　　5、形容词、副词（略）
　　6、谓语错误（主谓一致、时态、语态）
' c, b! Q) I8 {7 K- |) }　　1) Business today whether it is running a little gas-station or a big factory take good management.[takes]
　　2) Advances in technology has also changed people’s lives.
" n2 y5 R: J/ ]1 V  v* l1 B　　3) But if 98 percent of us doesn’t need to work, what are we going to do with ourselves? [don’t]
　　4) Whether women who have started a career will attain pay equality with men rest on at least two factors. [rests]
# x# Y. g( u7 P4 S/ a) [+ ]$ E+ m　　5) In some places all the trees have cut down. [have been]