2012年12月大学英语六级作文写作技巧(27)

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2012年12月大学英语六级作文写作技巧(27)
词汇错误(搭配错误、用词错误) 中 华 考 试 网
( M& v8 Q2 r. \　　逻辑错误（肯定否定乱用）
9 z2 U, n: J  L　　1) Blood pressure drugs definitely help some people live after a heart attack, but these same drugs may be both necessary and harmful for those with only mild blood pressure problems. [unnecessary]
　　2) In every case, the influential person may consciously notice the imitation but he will feel comfortable in its presence. [unconsciously]
　多词少词（介词、冠词、形式宾语）
　　1) When two Americans meet for first time, it is normal for them to call each other by their given name immediately. [the first]
　　2）In fact, until recently seawater has almost be considered to be useless and no value. [of no]
　　Passage 2
　　Until the very latest moment of his existence, man
　　has been bound to the planet on which be originated and
9 I4 P# k' B1 c3 t1 _3 F　　developed. Now he had the capability to leave that planet 1. has
　　and move out into the universe to those worlds which he
　　had known previously only directly. Men have explored 2. indirectly
　　parts of the moon. put spaceships in orbit around another
  C8 p' C5 s* O* v　　planet and possibly within the decade will land into anoth- 3. on
5 F  K8 ^/ N# e; t9 `9 k) g& A　　er planet and explore it. Can we be too bold as to sug- 4. so
8 t& I  L/ h$ z' b+ S0 E  P5 e　　gest that we may be able to colonize other planet 5. planets
+ ~* N4 A2 r. q' c　　within the not-too-distant future? Some have advocat-
　　ed such a procedure as a solution to the population
　　problem: ship the excess people off to the moon. But
2 c+ S0 X4 }4 {　　we must keep in head the billions of dollars we might 6. mind
　　spend in carrying out the project. To maintain the
　　earth’s population at its present level, we would
　　have to blast off into space 7,500 people every hour of 考试用书
　　every day of the year.
* X4 {5 a9 p. k+ s- E& ~& x! |; R　　Why are we spending so little money on space 7. much
6 ~* ?9 S9 A1 O( }8 }" k) a0 o　　exploration? Consider the great need for improving 8. Considering
. {1 C) v/ \* V　　many aspects of the global environment, one is surely
　　justified in his concern for the money and resources
) F! a9 @3 A, Y' K! ~8 b! E2 ~; ~% a9 g　　that they are poured into the space exploration ef- 9. 去掉
　　forts. But perhaps we should look at both sides of the
　　coin before arriving hasty conclusions. 10. arriving at/reaching