2011年12月英语六级写作冲刺讲义03

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二、 社会热点话题(Essay II):
　　㈠文 章 结 构 模 式：
: c# p( v5 ^  A4 w2 L% ^% q　　Paragraph I: （1）引出要评论的事物或观点(general)；
　　（2）提出问题(specific)。
　　Paragraph II: （1）作者对该现象或问题的基本看法，即文章的论点句；
/ R+ L: a$ `& k　　（2）支持性的细节分论点；
　　（3）本段总结（可以省略）。
　　Paragraph III: （1）总结全文，定下结论（通常为我的对策或看法）。
　　Example:
　　My View on Fake Commodities
8 `) Y, \& n$ t　　Like most people, I welcome the advent of the market economy. Nevertheless, it must be admitted that, along with the benefits of the market economy, have come problems. In my opinion, the biggest problem is the large number of fake and shoddy goods, which are found all over the country and do great harm to society.
　　Fake and shoddy goods are harmful on two levels. Some people think that the quickest way to make profits is by selling poor-quality commodities, and this undermines the nation’s economy. At the same time, some fake and shoddy goods are bad for people’s health. This makes consumers distrust the sellers and the free market in general.
- _+ x3 \" c4 _+ M  O　　In view of the seriousness of this problem, it is essential that laws and regulations be worked out to ban the manufacture and circulation of fake and shoddy goods. At the same time, consumers should be educated to identify sub-standard commodities. With proper laws and an alert public, it will only be a matter of time before fake and shoddy goods become things
) g0 l) [" q/ m7 S& _0 t2 N' l　　㈡适 用 句 型：
+ i3 `, W1 I. N　　首段引出话题：
　　1. Nowadays, …… has become a problem we have to face.
5 u; p. O  J. u' V2 L: U" j8 L+ j/ E　　如今……已经成为我们必须面对的问题。
" N. p; g. S+ L( ?/ `: c1 E　　2. Nowadays, more and more people are concerned about the problem …….
+ v9 D% ?- i7 b4 A! E7 ^/ P　　现在越来越多的人开始关注……的问题。
$ i) I, b' v1 Y. B* j+ L　　3. Recently, the rise in the phenomenon of …… has drawn/aroused/captured  worldwide attention.
! g+ T0 K' J3 W9 q: T+ C4 u) U# k　　最近……现在的日益增多已经引起了全世界的注意。
　　4. Recently, the  issue/problem/question  of …… has been   brought into focus/
& O" A2 A% ?( f　　/brought to public attention/posed among public attention.
8 o4 k3 y1 B1 _  ~) G3 s; |　　最近……问题已经成为人们关注的焦点。
　　5. In recently years, many  cities/nations/people  have been  faced/troubled  with the serious problem of …….
　　在最近几年里，很多城市/国家/人已经面临……问题/受到……的干扰。
7 p9 t: r. F/ N  A. A+ z　　6.Nowadays more and more people  come to realize/be aware  of the importance of …….
: {  W9 Y, @4 ^' z7 j　　越来越多的人开始意识到……的重要性。
1 H$ U7 |/ n% T' V; Z6 ]& O　　7. It is undeniable/There is no denying the fact that   …… has become the utmost concern among people nowadays.
　　不可否认，……已经成为人们最关注的问题。