英语六级改错：改错部分20篇(17)

会计考友 · 发表于 2012-8-14 10:46:58

第十七篇： Error Correction (15 minutes)
Childhood is a time when there are few responsibilities
to make life difficult. If a child has good parents, he
is fed, looked after and loved, what he may do, It is --71--
improbable that he will ever again in his life be given
so much without having to do anything in turn. In addition, --72--
life is always presenting new things to the child—things
that have lost their interesting for older people because --73--
they are too well-known. A child finds pleasure in playing
in the rain, or in the snow. [JP+2]His first visit to the
seaside is a marvelous adventure. But a child has his pains:
He is not so free to do as he wishes as he thinks old --74--
people do; he is continually being told not to do things,
or being punished for that he has done wrong. --75--
His life is therefore not perfectly happy.--76--
When the young man starts to earn his own living, he
becomes free from the discipline of school and parents;
but at the same time he is forced to accept responsibilities.
He can not longer expect others to pay for his food, his
clothes, and his room, but has to work if he wants to live
comfortable. If he spends most of his time playing about in --77--
the way that he used to as a child, he will suffer hungry. --78--
And if he breaks the laws of society as he used to break
the laws of his parents, he may go to prison. If, therefore, --79--
he works hard, keeps out of trouble and has good health,
he can have the great happiness of seeing himself making --80--
steady progress in his job and of building up for himself
his own position in society.
答案：
71.what改为whatever。whatever引导让步状语从句，相当于no matter what，意思是“无论什么”，“不管什么”，whatever在从句中作宾语。
72.turn改为return。短语in turn表示“轮流地; 挨个, 依次; 反过来”，而在这里是指孩子对父母的回报。
73.interesting改为interest。在形容词性物主代词their的后面应跟名词性成分。
74.do改为 are。与前面的is相对应。
75.that改为what。that引导的是定语从句，在本句中应该使用关系代词what，相当于the thing/ things that。
76.not改为no。固定搭配的副词短语“no longer”
77.comfortable改为comfortably。修饰动词live应为副词而不是形容词。
78.suffer改为go或become或be。或把hungry改为hunger。
79.therefore改为however。此处的条件状语从句表示转折。
80.making 改为 make。

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