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[六级改错] 大学英语六级:短文改错(二十八)

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发表于 2012-8-14 10:46:58 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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+ C+ O0 s6 B7 X6 HThe World Health Organization (WHO) says its ten-year
8 e1 F! F1 z3 l& H4 Y' ocampaign to remove leprosy (麻风病) as a world health , p" g3 J( \; N
problem has been successful. Doctor Brundtland, head of the
1 u9 I. N( }4 `# x; \WHO, says a number of leprosy cases around the world has ___1___
' u* x9 k, Z( Rbeen cut of ninety percent during the past ten years. She says ___2___ 0 C' _3 r+ w/ w  r  t$ C, x
efforts are continuing to complete end the disease. ___3___; W1 M% E' m% f; g( B! X, F
Leprosy is caused by bacteria spread through liquid from & L. X- x' F5 C$ p. D' Z
the nose and mouth. The disease mainly effects the skin and ___4___ $ ^& f, l" @0 l; j2 m
nerves. However, if leprosy is not treated it can cause permanent
" Z  X* Y2 Y5 b. K4 idamage for the skin, nerves, eyes, arms or legs. ___5___: h. z  f: T: u8 E9 D# m, p* ~6 s
In 1999, an international campaign began to end leprosy. $ y1 A/ l$ u) u; O, e
The WHO, governments of countries most affected by the $ J! W4 y9 ]1 u, B+ E7 B
disease, and several other groups are part of the campaign.
8 P. {* I: `. e( b& P3 y4 gThis alliance guarantees that all leprosy patients, even they ___6___
" F* E# ~! y. T" r  L% p) a6 Aare poor, have a right to the most modern treatment.4 p0 J$ @4 g& S6 `- n; I- o! L- a# K! A
Doctor Brundtland says leprosy is no longer a disease " h7 M6 [4 i# j: I* B& v
that requires life-long treatments by medical experts. Instead,
( N6 L- J. K8 p/ x! Ypatients can take that is called a multi-drug therapy. This ___7___! B8 {# {$ m0 M
modern treatment will cure leprosy in 6 to 12 months,
8 I2 q* C( @5 F, x0 W; @5 q- ndepend on the form of the disease. The treatment combines ___8___5 j, K4 B5 Z) O2 A6 Z. B% g
several drugs taken daily or once a month. The WHO has
! y. ]  s/ K# S% i  agiven multi-drug therapy to patients freely for the last five ___9___ ; |: A0 M' ?( t+ K, N/ z  f. E8 L
years. The members of the alliance against leprosy plan to ' Q' m, G6 |8 F* `
target the countries which still threatened by leprosy. Among ___10___$ U2 a0 L7 R, \3 Y2 C- W3 Q
the estimated 600,000 victims around the world, the WHO - ~- M7 J  G) ]4 j/ Q
believes about 70% are in India. The disease also remains a
  l, o' b8 `4 E; W6 u* aproblem in Africa and South America.
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参考答案及解析:
0 H( R6 A/ R7 r* U9 X1. a → the7 Z. J2 G+ T4 h, M; t! R5 e
此处指的是麻风病例的数量,主语是number,而非a number of cases。 , T. J4 K  u7 `: }4 s5 q

9 s# w+ H- j3 `2. of → by / about / around / nearly4 x# I" G" x6 E7 e' x1 ]' B
Nine percent表示cut的幅度,而非削减的宾语,所以不能改为off /out /down。
- g/ X% ]2 `  f% @1 @" w7 E/ ~/ O
1 D; \2 p9 e. b2 F3. complete → completely) E8 P' x! @) l* M& V
此词修饰动词end,所以要用副词。3 }0 E* l' f5 T0 _3 B
4. effects → affects4 o* R- y( Q  z( g
Sffect作动词时意为“产生,招致(某种结果);实现,完成”,但此处要表示“影响”,故应改为affects。: t8 r# ]5 K/ s. O) w0 @; e& ^
5. for → to) V, k& [2 j/ P$ I: y$ u9 i8 K
Cause / do damage to为固定搭配。$ H' u7 z( ?7 U5 [- n
6. even 后加 if / though
4 ^. q, T3 V. [Even单独使用时意为“甚至,更”,even if / though意为“即使,尽管”。根据意思的意思应该是“尽管麻风病病人贫穷,国际联盟也会保证他们会得到最好的治疗”。* U3 b: V% o4 f/ K$ c9 M7 V
7. that → what! L0 B0 W4 V6 u: {  g$ }
本句take后面的句子应该名词性从句是作take的宾语,又因为该从句缺少主语,应该要用what而不用that。
1 T4 W' {. K0 q3 [8. depend → depending+ x: C! z& Y  C# q2 p  o
本句已经有了谓语will cure,所以depend要改成现在分词形式作状语。
4 B- J" n# H% n1 n+ v9. freely → free6 ?% w9 ]. J4 }6 K- k6 ]
Freely意为“自由地”,free意为“免费的,空闲的”,此处指的意思是“免费的”而非“自由地”
. P1 J; u& e7 U1 b10. which 后加 are或去掉which4 p. h9 C% Q/ R% V  D! g; X' O' q2 e" r
该定语从句的现行词countries与从句中的threatened应该是被动关系,所以要加上系动词are。或者去掉which直接用threatened作countries的定语。
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