第十七篇： Error Correction (15 minutes) E6 n* _# r. a& K/ {
Childhood is a time when there are few responsibilities
: |$ k+ X: v& Z& u5 oto make life difficult. If a child has good parents, he 3 e* e, R4 c. F( z4 Z+ L L
is fed, looked after and loved, what he may do, It is --71--
4 c4 x ~# | I; T& d* gimprobable that he will ever again in his life be given
, Z3 ~- X& q H; D6 Yso much without having to do anything in turn. In addition, --72--) h' p& j! f# s! V3 |7 F$ D. ^# q
life is always presenting new things to the child—things
: [' T$ O4 h7 Y5 S4 Hthat have lost their interesting for older people because --73--
/ |" D8 l0 e& W/ j2 w% J. w+ k7 {! B, Mthey are too well-known. A child finds pleasure in playing
6 r8 ]7 g/ q6 W( y# Vin the rain, or in the snow. [JP+2]His first visit to the
# G& F2 O, I: Z" \seaside is a marvelous adventure. But a child has his pains:
( W" z) y* x. ?" ~& CHe is not so free to do as he wishes as he thinks old --74--
' {5 r( n% D9 r1 W7 ^* Epeople do; he is continually being told not to do things,. q/ O: N' J7 g% P
or being punished for that he has done wrong. --75--
7 h2 @ U+ V7 p8 i- h$ o: M. ZHis life is therefore not perfectly happy.--76--
9 ^" u+ i3 S6 r" HWhen the young man starts to earn his own living, he 6 o# v0 ~+ v) k8 z1 F- [
becomes free from the discipline of school and parents;
I' p9 A% C) hbut at the same time he is forced to accept responsibilities. 2 ?' _% m7 r# k2 |- S! V, c
He can not longer expect others to pay for his food, his ( C* r* ^$ l* D4 g
clothes, and his room, but has to work if he wants to live 7 ]1 {1 Q% K+ F: P, H
comfortable. If he spends most of his time playing about in --77--: |7 `1 t" @) ?3 |% f& z1 r& q
the way that he used to as a child, he will suffer hungry. --78--. Z" |6 ?& ?3 J' ?( ~: P t# j
And if he breaks the laws of society as he used to break + y. G5 y6 Z2 B( y) c6 O8 X5 l
the laws of his parents, he may go to prison. If, therefore, --79--, f& a7 d6 p# Y! u& }
he works hard, keeps out of trouble and has good health, + y" i& L" A) l: M
he can have the great happiness of seeing himself making --80-- S5 M5 L, Y( `4 X" A9 c% h/ {
steady progress in his job and of building up for himself 8 r; R R3 j) l/ ?5 A; l5 u; F
his own position in society.0 }& y. }% i3 w/ ?; L
答案：
0 o+ _3 w* w; A2 z% G71.what改为whatever。whatever引导让步状语从句，相当于no matter what，意思是“无论什么”，“不管什么”，whatever在从句中作宾语。. ?1 v5 W- e [+ S* k
72.turn改为return。短语in turn表示“轮流地; 挨个, 依次; 反过来”，而在这里是指孩子对父母的回报。! r5 q5 q% ~( [$ z% ~
73.interesting改为interest。在形容词性物主代词their的后面应跟名词性成分。
" @0 \8 y. J" r4 g+ J74.do改为 are。与前面的is相对应。
7 P- r- h" e1 t$ {: Z75.that改为what。that引导的是定语从句，在本句中应该使用关系代词what，相当于the thing/ things that。3 y8 R3 \5 m g6 g2 K0 [# L
76.not改为no。固定搭配的副词短语“no longer”) n8 e. ]8 X, `+ i1 K5 e
77.comfortable改为comfortably。修饰动词live应为副词而不是形容词。
7 Y% P; Z: K9 _3 @, U+ _78.suffer改为go或become或be。或把hungry改为hunger。# ~4 p C, V* I" r6 R. M( m
79.therefore改为however。此处的条件状语从句表示转折。
! T: L1 E9 A+ T80.making 改为 make。 |
发表于 2012-8-14 10:46:58
