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[六级改错] 2011年大学英语六级改错模拟练习题18

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发表于 2012-8-14 10:46:58 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
If you smoke and you still don’t believe that there’s a definite link
: f3 l  H8 o+ @4 X; x' [) r. sbetween smoke and troubles, heart disease and lung cancer, 1. _____
5 v( j9 j, Y, a; k* H/ B- ^7 R5 ^and you are certainly deceiving yourself. No one will accuse you 2.___
& o! }, k$ L4 E$ A8 E. ^0 N3 _- z% nwith hypocrisy. Let us just say that you are suffering from a bad case of 3.______
1 p: t! T0 S8 c; E$ iwishful thinking. This needn’t make you too uncomfortable because you are
4 J, A6 }2 A/ D  R4 s* Lin a good company. Whenever the subject of smoking and health is 4.___ 6 w3 _5 e& C3 F7 G) I  q
raised, the governments of most countries hear no evil, see no evil and
! r8 w: H: g0 f- @! {. Wsmell no evil. Admittedly, a few governments have not taken timid 5.______
. p# ?4 x: S+ S4 K* P) _& n0 s, ?measures. In Britain for instance, cigarette advertising has been banned on
8 V6 Y! e# Q- mtelevision. The conscience of the nation is appeased, while the population 5 h6 [8 Y+ Y: T
continues to puff its way to smoky, cancerous death.
; |3 T. [  S. Y3 g- o8 e( {You don’t have to look very far to find out that the official reactions 6._____
+ ]/ W# y" T; q4 q, q- Hto medical findings have been so lukewarm. The answer is simple money. 7._______ * q/ h" k' `1 K3 u% \
Tobacco is a wonderful commodity to tax. It’s almost like a tax on 8 r+ c, p# ~+ n. F6 r" M; q
our daily bread. In tax revenue lonely, the government of Britain 8.______
" }4 w8 ?8 a, T: b2 Y$ h" i# @collect enough from smokers to pay for its entirely educational facilities. 9._____
7 ~* o0 L1 V9 F. T) }8 {So while the authorities point out ever so discreetly that smoking may, $ t: {* q6 |. C! D3 M- \
conceivably, harmful, it doesn’t do to shout too loudly about it. 10.______ ) Q# _5 m9 r1 \; l
1.smoke -%26gt; smoking   w( h1 u1 c. b, N2 {
smoke作名词时意为“烟雾”,作动词时意为“吸烟”。此处指吸烟和肺部疾病的关系
5 L) L& C) ^  a$ r+ n故使用smoking。
3 w/ Y- Q- h# g* M2.and -%26gt; / 或and -%26gt; then
( C6 w7 w- O! zand是并列连词,连接两个对称的分句。但此处前面是条件状语从句,不对称,故应该去掉and或将and改为 then,使后面变成主句
( L/ s. V8 r/ f5 ]2 P3.with -%26gt; of
5 I+ ?2 B5 }) faccuse sb of sth 意为“为….而控告或谴责某人”,不能使用介词with . a6 |% U) [7 G  d  I: U& R
4.a -%26gt; / ( q& d7 }0 D* }5 O/ O7 r1 W
此处显然不是“在一家好公司”( in a good company)的意思,而是说“有人和你作伴”(in good company)。此处的company意为“陪伴”,抽象名词,前面不用冠祠。
* W: S) S+ _! [5.not -%26gt; /
) H! L. ^2 e% s6 v逻辑错误 1 Q$ F1 h0 |6 b
6.that -%26gt; why & V4 I' J& o/ p
此处的意思是要找到“为什么官方对医学发现应冷淡”。 ( U( J. ^+ i3 J% w  i! ?
7.simple -%26gt; simply
" C0 }8 z6 m5 Q9 g* F这里的句意是“答案仅仅是钱”,故使用副词simply。simple的意思是“简单”。 8 P( c# A& z# e! n3 d
8.lonely -%26gt; alone
8 ~$ n; ]) X; H8 ~* ]* ]& ilonely意为“孤独”的,alone意为“单独,一个”,此处意为“单税收一项”,故用alone ( T; @# N- c1 g- k; _& D0 A
9.collect -%26gt; collects . M/ e& }1 N3 Z) T1 y1 U! E+ V
本句的主语是the government of Britain ,是单数,所以谓语collect也要用单数。 * b$ ]& ~6 v$ n  L/ ]
10.harmful前加be / y5 W; ^6 t$ B- n4 ~9 s
本句的conceivably 是插入语,如果不看它的话,就很容易看出这个句子缺少了系动词be。
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