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[六级改错] 2011年大学英语六级改错模拟练习题57

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发表于 2012-8-14 10:46:58 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
The National Endowment for the Arts recently released 1 S/ L0 S! v2 ]' y2 h3 x
the results of its “Reading at Risk” survey, which described
2 O9 Z& c, R" E$ P) N/ k4 D" Uthe movement of the American public away from books and / ]: ~% b! c+ e7 Y. B# a8 z  y7 y8 {
literature and toward television and electronic media. 4 L. U: p& G1 K" _
According to the survey, “reading is on the decline on every ___1___
, n1 E( A6 w5 E' z$ f/ Gregion, within every ethnic group, and at every educational level.”  B, f4 T9 Z# B2 u: S9 A
The day the NEA report released, the U.S. House, in a tie ___2___
  ~' Q0 c8 V: M' |: b) D' m, xVote, upheld the government’s right to obtain bookstore and
" l) m: b1 w; ?2 q' g/ V+ r- E! ]library records under a provision of the USA Patriot Act. The$ Q, S) Q5 ~+ S+ B% i
House proposal would have barred the federal government
7 f: _- B5 e2 E, T5 O( Ufrom demand library records, reading lists, book customer ___3___
+ \8 `% H5 H" N! Z, I1 z! |lists and other material in terrorism and intelligence investigations.0 Z7 Z1 d; m# ?. a
These two events are completely unrelated to, yet they ___4___
2 y8 V+ M# N0 `' oecho each other in the message they send about the place of
8 q7 ?" N+ y5 i3 p1 e, q2 Wbooks and reading in American culture. At the heart 3 ?0 D& r& Y+ G* b) g% a
of the NEA survey is the belief in our democratic ___5___
  ?8 X6 k! C8 \1 {System depends on leaders who can think critically, analyze ( [' @$ U: ~" Z" w
texts and writing clearly. All of these are skills promoted by ___6___7 W% P, _( [9 W4 h  v  d6 }
reading and discussing books and literature. At the same time,$ V% e" Z1 ]3 }/ I) g
through a provision of the Patriot Act, the leaders of our
! @5 U) r& z' d  ^' J3 qcountry are unconsciously sending the message that reading
; {. Y1 ~" K3 U; fmay be connected to desirable activities that might ___7___8 b0 [# M# x, |0 S4 T: I
undermine our system of government rather than helping ; ~$ a8 P) W9 G
democracy flourish.
) L" k' w' a- r* a; aOur culture’s decline in reading begin well before the___8___( Y' S1 k9 ]+ X$ l+ B% ?
existence of the Patriot Act. During the 1980s’ culture wars,
' `0 J1 ^+ A7 }3 V: F* Gschool systems across the country pulled some books from
: ]9 D* P; B; S+ clibrary shelves because its content was deemed by parents ___9___4 A- M, c/ ^6 c6 f
and teachers to be inappropriate. Now what started in schools 1 T* a7 `. Y$ r7 i/ V, G- f- v, r0 {
across the country is playing itself out on a nation stage and ___10___
5 i1 K5 w0 i6 S/ S6 gis possibly having an impact on the reading habits of the
# k$ ?6 ?. \4 U  Z. B! t/ lAmerican public.
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-8-14 10:46:59 | 显示全部楼层

2011年大学英语六级改错模拟练习题57

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本行中According to the survey在语义和结构上都没有错;on the decline为固定搭配,意为“呈下降趋势”,符合文意,也正确;故将错误锁定为介词on。on意为“在…之上”,而此处表示“在任何地区/区域”,故将on改为in(在;在…之内)。 8 m! f, G+ B- m# `. b) ^7 s
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2. report后加was./ T; R7 H! C% X  g) Z
分析句子结构,the U.S.House(美国众议院)为句子主句,upheld(支持,赞成)为谓语,The day the NEA report released是一个时间状语从句,此处关系代词when被省略;report应该是被发表的,所以应在report和released之间插入was,released对此也有很好的提示作用。注意此处应该使用系动词的过去时态。in a tie vote为习惯用法,意为“以微弱优势胜出”。. X: o) c4 |% M5 I
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3. demand -%26gt; demanding。 . y+ e  Y& J2 `
“bar...from doing sth.”为固定用法,意为“阻止/禁止…做某事”。
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$ L6 l* c! T* n9 ?4. to -%26gt; /.
) ?+ p! R2 z7 A  i0 X“unrelated to”为固定搭配,意为“与…无关”,其后须接名词;如果保留介词to,根据语义此处需添加名词性词组each other,这与命题规律不符,故将to去掉。unrelated意为“无关的,不相关的”。
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5. in -%26gt; that.# p+ [% O# o- @& _
分析句子结构,本句为介词短语提前引起的倒装句,句子的谓语is被提到主语the belief之前。本句中同时出现两个动词,系动词is在主句中作谓语,因此depends应该是从句中的谓语。本句中,our democratic system depends on leaders...clearly是the belief的同位语从句;同位语从句中,先行词为物时,一般由关系代词that来引导,且that不能省略,故将in改为that。belief in为习惯用法,意为“相信…,对…有信心”,但介词in不能引导从句。) v3 k( f( T3 Z0 s4 X# Q# ]9 }. r
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6. writing -%26gt; wrtie.# I- C6 ]: z3 e3 G9 i
writing与think和analyze是由and连接的三个并列的动词,且三个动词都位于情态动词can之后,应使用动词原形,故将writing改为write。
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$ E8 k5 G; v* h7 }/ H7. desirable -%26gt; undesirable.
6 D3 ?; J& g6 i5 F& o* dbe connected to为固定用法,意为“与…有关”,其后一般接名词。此处的定语从句that might undermine our system of government rather than helping democracy flourish修饰名词activities,根据从句中的undermine(损坏,破坏)及rather than helping(而不是帮助)可知,这些活动(activities)应该是消极的,desirable(可取的,有利的)与语义不符,故将desirable改为undesirable。
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1 R% d; s5 @2 L& @- l  S2 m" b8. begin -%26gt; began.! w/ A* M+ Q  P7 g
“decline in”为习惯用法,意为“在某方面有所下降”;well可以表示程度,意为“相当的;充分的”,well before表示“早在…之前就已经”。before表示动作已经发生,因此本句中的动词应使用过去时态,故将begin改为began。: u4 O1 H0 A1 I% Z$ i! \/ v5 K1 k0 B
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9. its -%26gt; their.( S  ]' w3 F; `. G; J. I& g. r
because在本句中引导原因状语从句,从句中的主语content(内容)为不可数名词,且本句描述的是过去发生的事,故从句中的was为单复数形式和时态都正确。此处的its对应的是主句中的some books,二者在语意上矛盾,故将its改为their 。/ R% G( l/ i! R" {
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10 nation -%26gt; national.
0 E7 K" \) g# X# U本句的主语为由what引导的从句,故谓语为is,主谓一致正确。play out为固定搭配,意为“发出;展示”;此处表示“在全国范围这个舞台上展示”,nation意为“国家,民族”,强调国家主权和民族特征,常含政治意味;national意为“国家级的;全国范围内的”,表示一种更高级别或更大的范围,故将nation改为national。
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