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[六级改错] 2011年大学英语六级改错模拟练习题58

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Psychologists take opposing views of how external rewards,
: x+ M3 |; T' ?8 |from warm praise to cold cash, affect motivation and creativity.
" M$ h* g1 s5 p0 b% N9 `( D4 ABehaviorists, who study the relation between actions and their( ^- M& k8 F2 S( y/ n$ }  s
consequences, argue that rewards cannot improve performance ___1___
1 f$ Z3 h0 Y" w! o8 J; F2 {at work and school. Cognitive resear-chers, who study various" M( g6 t# J  @6 ^: U
aspects of mental life, maintain that rewards often destroy
) B7 |2 p9 ~& ncreativity by encouraging independence on approval and gifts ___2___- P: Z% w. @, S6 }1 G( N9 E8 U: F1 |
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The later view has gained many supporters, especially ___3___
7 I! w' X3 {- c* g9 C& Qamong educators. But the careful use of small monetary rewards
7 Y/ O# d2 }: c$ lspeak creativity in grade-school children, suggesting that properly ___4___
  e+ E  Y/ e: [) ?, Fpresented inducements(刺激)indeed aid inventiveness,# \8 \8 j5 _1 u5 M& Y3 ^
according to a study in the June Journal of Personality and Social
7 C6 K8 {7 X) c. t, oPsychology. “ If kids know they are working for a reward and can+ c2 l8 i% s4 v0 `& y% W
focus on a relative challenging task, they show the most creativity.” ___5___
: y0 F: v2 I- t& ssays Robert Eisenberger of the University of Delacare in Newark.5 b% l3 f9 D4 G( Q
“But it is easy to kill creativity through giving rewards for ___6___' h+ k5 S& ?" i0 w( }
poor performance or creating too much anticipation of rewards.” ___7___
8 B, Z: H, _4 _  v“A teacher who continually draws attention to rewards or who
& X& u5 P  H$ s$ ^hands out high grades for ordinary achievement ends up uninspired ___8___2 }% V9 Z) U; `0 C/ A
students.” Eisenberger holds. As an example of the latter point,
/ @2 t9 A9 W+ L' yhe notes growing efforts at major universities to tighten grading
) r/ i3 [" b( \1 r2 [1 F; Z1 }standards and restor falling grades.' {/ j! Q: p) O+ j1 r1 Z2 X8 B
In earlier grades, the use of so-called token economics, in
" F8 k( M! D7 m( h0 Pthat students handle challenging problems and receive ___9___
, O/ B% r( C' j, [4 Y, W$ mperformance-based points toward valued rewards, show promise ___10___, f$ \% G* k# Y# j+ q
in raising effort and creativity, the Delaware psycholoist claims.' S! n' t. q5 B1 o$ C$ O1 |

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* b" T) x$ g1 j7 I: ?' v5 C) z4 q答案及解析:
+ o5 q$ r( R; B! l, I/ w7 L# {) p1. cannot -%26gt; can
+ S* @+ A1 @# U4 k9 M8 ^  f! @本句中,who引导非限制性定语从句做插入语,主语为Behaviorists,故谓语argue保持原形。通读全文可知,本文通过Psychologists的观点,引出其反对观点和支持观点,并对两种观点进行讨论。由第一段第二句中的谓语argue(“据理争辩”),可知Behaviorists在反对Psychologists的观点;第三句中的谓语maintain(“坚信”),则表明支持Psychologists观点的是Cognitive researchers。因此,Behaviorists表达的观点应该是rewards can improve performance at work and school,即“奖励可以促进人们在工作或在学习中的表现”,故将cannot改为can。
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2. independence -%26gt; dependence- X& t" R: R% F# }0 k# v# b' t+ W2 b
根据文意,independence on approval and gifts from others(“不依赖于他人的赞许和礼物”)与destroy creativity在语意上矛盾。故将independence改为dependence。' B: W- T. U" Q& w2 {+ s6 Y- ~% f
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3. later -%26gt; latter
$ j2 B0 w# ]: {( Plater意为“后来的”,latter意为“后者;第二个”。根据文意应该将later改为latter。
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4. speak -%26gt; speaks
: p; `1 F  K  T2 Sspeak的主语为上一行中的名词短语the careful use,主语应在数上保持一致,故将speak改为speaks;of all monetary rewards是the careful use的后置定语,作修饰成分。
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9 Y4 Z+ Z( {# d2 ?7 g# O5. relative -%26gt; relatively* n0 N7 U. k4 w$ ^
本行中的challenging意为“具有挑战性的”,是形容词,应该用副词来修饰,故将relative改为relatively。/ J5 C! u) c7 F8 C
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6. through -%26gt; by
# W% j# Z" b# m9 q, mthrough和by都可以表示“靠..,通过..”;前者一般接名词,后者接动名词。through后接动名词时,意为“由于…..”,与文意不符。
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$ _  o* I9 Z6 W' Z; d6 E8 C7. of -%26gt; for
5 U, e3 n/ V, y4 @此处rewards是anticipation的目标,应该用for,而of表示从属关系。
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8. uninspired前加with! c$ R; L4 p. W' {
end up在本句中的主语是A teacher,因此使用第三人称单数。end up意为“以…告终”,后接动名词介词短语,一般不直接加名词。故应该加上with。, o! K7 I* b+ U+ s( t
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9. that -%26gt; which
0 C' V2 @5 G! O# R( k' [3 [3 l根据上一行中逗号“,”可确定 in that引导的不是原因状语从句,所以in…rewards只能是非限制性定语从句,which可单独引导非限制性定语从句,也可以与介词搭配使用,that不能引导非限制性定语从句。
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10. show -%26gt; shows
- @; S. F( u! {: s& T* N分析全句结构可知,show是谓语,而主语是the use,of so-called token economics是后置定语,作主语的修饰成分。故将show改为shows。
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