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My opinion on certificate craze/ Y6 x' }# [7 s
The growing tendency among college students to get all kinds of certificates has now evolved into a craze. Just randomly ask a student what he or she is busily engaged in doing, quite possibly, you would get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind. So, why’s the craze?
7 E4 \' ~/ T, t" u: A The reason behind this phenomenon is common — the enormous pressure of finding a job. Faced with a harsh job market, most students have no choice but to seek more certificates to parlay their qualifications. Another factor is that diploma and certificates still weighs heavily in terms of signifying one’s ability. For the sake of increasing their odds of landing a better job, the students are compelled to run from one exam to another。2 I# a7 X, s9 e- U' V# @$ A' `
Though I have an open mind toward the craze on certificates, I suggest that students should be more rational when it comes to certificates, since they do not necessarily tell their ability. Instead, they should be more involved in learning and capability boosting, thus, opportunities would come quite naturally。% X6 \# L# S' e( n& n% G* D
文章点评：
1 E, E( g) l. C( Q e3 G1 \+ w 这是一篇“中等偏上”的学生作文。 本文先对学生的考证热进行简介，引出全篇；接着分析这一现象背后的原因；整体看思路清晰，逻辑严密，行文流畅，句式多变，用语较为地道。
6 Q! W5 O5 {9 Y0 m+ a3 G- b6 B8 h 本篇亮点表达：
: t* K6 t0 w- p, H, W) [& r The growing tendency … has now evolved into…3 S- d; @9 Q% z& {) i
be busily engaged in doing
) {) w/ N4 [1 u- `. @9 r The reason behind…
4 f0 _# q( M; q& A( U* R harsh job market
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parlay their qualifications
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发表于 2012-8-14 10:57:51
