Home, sweet home” is a phrase that express an essential5 [" C+ I" q7 g) n
attitude in the United States. Whether the reality of life in the. z* g+ L# X- R `2 k% F& v" z
family house is sweet or no sweet, the cherished ideal of home _____1_____
) X9 G4 _0 W2 r; q has great importance for many people.' h8 Y6 o6 v# @4 n
This ideal is a vital part of the American dream. This dream,
. S8 h3 k( M1 h1 f% J dramatized in the history of nineteenth century European settlers
, z7 B: w9 q0 g0 T2 ~ s$ q9 I of American West, was to find a piece of place, build a house _____2_____' w$ k O+ l$ E! }5 |! ?
for one’s family, and started a farm. These small households were _____3_____
1 W9 Q, b( z9 O+ o- O9 p portraits of independence: the entire family- mother, father, children,9 ^* E6 x3 _$ o" {' G4 f
even grandparents-live in a small house and working together to _____4_____) `, F% ~+ b+ r! T9 s
support each other. Anyone understood the life-and-death importance _____5_____5 l. }: T+ n( m" d7 N6 i
of family cooperation and hard work. Although most people in the
2 l' e% ]* j- b: z4 c% N7 F United States no longer live on farms, but the ideal of home ownership _____6_____
* X( U2 |" h* D) N is just as strong in the twentieth century as it was in the nineteenth.. J# g! E: o9 m+ N3 p- X
When U.S soldiers came home before World WarⅡ, for example, _____7_____
# k- i. W( G- n. H, m2 Z _$ A they dreamed of buying houses and starting families. But there was _____8_____
' O. J) i( {5 ]5 a- u5 F5 A a tremendous boom in home building. The new houses, typically in
, c! Q# S* A! h, H8 r the suburbs, were often small and more or less identical, but it satisfied _____9_____' l1 o2 [5 U/ p2 b: B; u
a deep need. Many regarded the single-family house the basis of their _____10_____, o; P, R: m+ J$ z; B/ T; N
way of life.+ q0 i: |1 O1 A7 q# \# Q5 J
参考答案及解析:% x3 L) t# V, n$ y; q, N! S
1 将no改为 not/ L7 i$ _6 [& n7 v
2 将place改为land
% B9 ?2 |! W7 t- P' L5 t place是可数名词,作“地方”讲,而land意为“土地,田地”是不可数名词。例如:
- j& l u' ~# |# _& H# g- t. \ Solitude is a good place to visit but a poor place to stay.
; W2 B" l6 u/ w6 d, a7 R+ ? 当你偶尔光顾时,独处是一个美妙的境地,但是如果久留,它却是一个糟糕的地方。" Q# `0 C, g' n2 l% ^. [8 l
There is a vacant piece of land near the house; we can build there.
: c3 R5 j ?: m- ]; U+ z 3 将started改为start0 Z O! \" Q, W! a7 J
start应使用不定式,以和前面的find,build一致。; g( P& e; f, P$ a% ]
4 将working改为work。; i$ T5 u6 {4 o' Y2 N4 J7 ^" j6 ]
work应该用第三人称复数,和live一致。另外,family在这里作“家人”讲,是复数。" H7 J a+ t5 q5 ?. }' j8 L
5 将anyone改为everyone1 W% N! x- x9 z' ?" E
这里是要用everyone指每个人,而不是要用anyone泛指。
[0 _' O$ }- r 6 将but删除
0 R* F- a4 c3 N6 ?3 a 7将before改为after
5 c' A, t6 j" v s/ A& g- ?9 ~ 根据上下文判断,这里要表达的是二战之后。
6 a7 ^7 w/ L( k. Y 8 将But改为 And& z8 { T% i) ^: [
根据语意,这里要表达的是递进关系,而不是转折关系。例如:' z" A, g% J i7 u
When I do good, I feel good. When I do bad, I feel bad. And that’s my religion.
7 A0 H$ H) w. s: H+ Q% V 当我行善事,我感到坦然;当我行恶时,我感到内疚。这就是我的人生之道。
' s5 v. F3 J/ h' B* Z; ~ 9 将it改为they
, I5 |/ T6 s; E 10 在house the中间加入介词as
8 x. X x' i$ z* J3 n. m9 h: f regard…as 作“把……当作……”讲。 |