A great many cities are experiencing difficulties which are nothing
! V! v) k/ N. Q5 k& ^+ A" q- e new in the history of cities, except in their scale. Some cities have lost their
+ m4 A/ L1 {/ z" j2 L2 S original purpose and have not found new one. And any large or rich city is __1__( d* F; D1 l7 m; {$ I* K
going to attract poor immigrants, who flood in, filling with hopes of __2__
' R3 y6 t0 T8 t' L, { prosperity which are then often disappointing. There are backward towns on the% H' r' w+ g7 X" A, H% h
edge of Bombay or Brasilia, just as though there were on the edge of __3__
6 W! N- D5 x, r$ C3 L( [ seventeenth-century London or early nineteenth-century Paris. This is new is __4__& Z3 W, i* j4 K$ T
the scale. Descriptions written by eighteenth-century travelers of the poor of ^" S6 D1 S2 E9 k
Mexico City, and the enormous contrasts that was to be found there, are very __5__3 w7 p c( C8 `0 t
dissimilar to descriptions of Mexico City today—the poor can still be numbered __6__3 L( n) m5 N B2 R# p" N+ e! d
in millions.& B* B2 G y* k3 B5 _
The whole monstrous growth rests on economic prosperity, but behind it lies __7__
: c7 v% r- [! F* v two myths; the myth of the city as a promised land, that attracts immigrants __8__
( d4 z, F0 G! m2 e! t from rural poverty and brings it flooding into city centers, and the myth of the __9__" e/ ]3 V# Y0 r# V8 O
country as a Garden of Eden, which, a few generations late, sends them flood __10__! E3 r+ y: z* y4 R! X4 a- k+ z1 z1 G1 ^
-ing out again to the suburbs.2 v% m# B( W, }5 r: i# W8 O
参考答案及解析:
+ J5 a0 a9 S0 X 1. 在new one前加a
; {' z0 U. X4 w8 B 这里one指代上下文中的可数名词purpose,因此该词前要有限定词。! c) V& a" u+ C( I
2. 将filling改为filled) k9 Z! H" q' X, Y; z9 F% h/ d- c- J
在这里,非谓语动词fill与句子的who(poor immigrants)之间是逻辑动宾关系,因此要使用过去分词来表示被动意义。
0 X- Q7 y# R9 l! `5 V6 `" { 3. 去掉though' Q# Y5 A3 x( \: M) @# q
4. 将this改为what
) a9 z* c* Q& r0 k: O2 C: @0 n- D 根据句子结构,我们可以看出这里需要一个关系代词,它既能引导主语从句,同时也可以在从句中作主语,这个关系代词就是what。如:8 t/ n) Y1 u9 W: X
What I like in a good author is not what he says,but what he whispers。
2 V: X$ f- Y4 n( T 5. 将was改为were
8 c7 q* s1 J/ k c. C that引导定语从句,其先行词是descriptions…and the enormous contrasts,因此谓语动词be要用复数。
* S6 \6 E# X. J2 N2 Z, f 6. 将dissimilar 改为 similar
2 T! p6 ^% a+ Y 这里要表示的是“共同,相似”之处。
9 p3 c' P7 j: i 7.将lies 改为lie1 P: n. i5 L, E# X) P. G
behind it lie two myths 是个倒装句,主语为two myths,可见谓语动词要使用复数。 z6 `0 _+ c$ K
8. 将that改为which
" `: [2 `; f. l; n/ L, t [* ` 这里是一个非限制性定语从句,因此不可用that,而要用which。
P; Q0 H7 J: I2 T9 t7 s 9. 将it改为them4 k* ?" o( x; H" _" N1 a5 h! Q
复数名词immigrants的代词,所以要用复数形式。) H9 H1 {8 `: _* T& o- D
10. 将late改为later |