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[专八辅导] 英语写作精讲精练:一个公式三个原则(3)

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发表于 2012-8-14 11:29:10 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
  非谓语动词方式处理示例
1 r9 |( p: D. a* R  示例1:I sat beside her. I felt very nervous./ |# k2 O! K1 b7 t& D1 f( j
  可变为:Sitting beside her, I felt very nervous.
: p, n7 f/ B5 m* c. `' U  或者:I sat beside her, feeling very nervous.
+ o9 }& ]4 q- ?' U' |  b  示例2:I want to quit smoking. I eat candies.( P* h+ l; U! b) r
  可变为:To quit smoking, I eat candies.
( X7 d1 D; D" ^# m! Q% i) ~/ p% h  示例3:A young man was tired of sleeping on the floor. He saved up for years to buy a real bed.
# @% \' j5 S4 _  可以变为:Tired of sleeping on the floor, a young man saved up for years to buy a real bed.
! F: y9 f/ d! ?# _  示例4:Jimmy was dressed up as Father Christmas. He was accompanied by a guard of honor of six pretty girls. He set off down the main street of the city. He rode a baby elephant. The elephant was called Jumbo.
) e3 G' k* P6 T# d! C  可以变为:Dressed up as Father Christmas and accompanied by a guard of honor of six pretty girls, Jimmy set off down the main street of the city, riding a baby elephant called Jumbo.5 g4 m, R3 l4 R8 ?0 u
  定语从句方式处理
: G: k+ j5 ?$ q) o6 b  定语从句当然是属于“从属”的行列,所以,是处理为从属方式的手段之一。请看下面的例子:
, }0 C$ i$ \7 Z6 g, b& \5 k  This is the only book.
! U' R# V7 q; f$ |( ~6 K3 W  I read the book during the holiday.$ E7 o3 S. `6 G- T
  两句的重合点在the book上面;将第二句中的the book抽出来,放到第一句book后面,其它内容向后甩。这样,我们就会看到the only book后面马上又在重复the book。为了避免重复,我们去掉the book,而换用另外一个词去替换,这个词就是指物的which或that。因为这里的book有only在修饰,所以,最终我们选用that;又因为that在定语从句中作宾语,所以,可以省略。
, [* X; z3 x( B8 T! e  下面两句的合并遵循同样的原则:
6 S9 c1 E& w( B' S) d  She is the girl.
7 I8 r, {4 W6 g4 [( `  The girl’s father is my boss.
; U, \3 q# r) W' ^  ?She is the girl whose father is my boss.6 k+ H1 z2 u1 Q7 Z4 L+ j
  几个句型:# |2 A* t8 g+ c$ E3 e2 M. K& N+ z
  …, but…句型(表转折关系)
; ?3 r0 s  z5 r: h2 F7 f  …, for…句型(表原因关系)( `( \: L! k, _3 |
  …, so…句型(表结果关系): V! i3 }$ M# v& U0 u
  …(,/;/.) however,…句型(表更强烈的转折关系)
8 i* ?9 S3 u7 ~2 H3 l  q0 i! |- Q1 b& O  …(,/;/.) therefore,…句型(更强烈的结果关系)
6 T9 j8 V5 J4 j/ b; V  …(,/;/.) meanwhile,…句型(表时间关系)+ g5 v( C% [( [; ]' n  ^
  …(,/;/.) consequently,…句型(表结果关系)# h4 t' [! j' Y  ^1 }0 ^1 v
  …(,/;/.) admittedly,…句型(表让步关系)
( O% q) e( o1 \0 p7 v  这些基本知识构成了:
# g; }7 V, N9 k# h" _' r8 g2 a6 [' g2 C  ?1)简单句扩展到复杂句# H& |+ R! I/ o) ^5 g, t& P3 k# l; H
  ?2)复杂句拆分为简单句7 r, Y4 w& F: t7 x1 y5 p
  由“分到合”,由“合到分”的“基石”。
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