We Americans are incredible lazy. Instead of __1__
4 J' B( m: D i' @ Cooking a simple, nourishing meal, we pop a freezing __2__! Z7 ?1 D" H5 z+ L
dinner into the oven. Instead of studying daily __3__
1 d; F" t! ?3 G7 c" q newspaper, we are contented with the capsule
/ P* C& a& g E% K& R7 x0 {/ Q summaries on the network news. Worse of all, instead __4__
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convenience store, we jump into our car. This __6__
+ h0 |; z3 K7 _ independence on the automobile, even for short __7__
+ I$ z7 L" ?+ h: o$ l$ \: r0 k trips, have robbed us of a valuable experience- __8__( C: b/ z) K+ O9 \8 r d( z6 F
walking. If we drove less and walked less, we __9__5 o" w/ J5 K1 b4 G; x
would save money, and become healthier, and discover __10__% [# W' y& H$ R l7 ?+ @4 k
fascinating things about our surroundings.
. |) @# \" ~" l& b7 i 答案及解析:
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! S: {' W7 O+ Y% t8 Q1 E incredible 改为 incredibly
: v4 X/ h: j: F 需要副词来修饰形容词lazy
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freezing 改为 frozen
; P( T4 d7 ~9 b6 l4 P3 Z freezing 指的是“极冷的”,而frozen指的是“冷冻的,冷冻过的”# S8 ^& ?3 [' c$ a0 ?
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$ S* M" a) d$ ^7 R- o' A studying 后加a 或者把newspaper 改为newspapers& H( _% W# m) W5 Y
中心词是可数名词,它或者以单数形式出现,前面加限定词a,或者以复数形式出现。
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Worse改为Worst
% i9 I4 s/ S( D3 L7 g" }9 V “of all”之前需要搭配最高级,表示“其中最…….的”7 J5 R( k" L+ Q$ [: ^3 f8 a0 b
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evenly 改为 even
6 N: t, g5 P y0 { evenly是副词,表示“平均地,均匀地”7 z( a$ F; Y) i& a1 V
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car改为cars
# c% U: i' x$ x 据上下文判断,这里泛指美国人跳进自己的车,而不是统统跳进一辆车,故应该为复数cars2 A+ @4 \+ R4 Q; B& J! ]: L& |
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independence 改为dependence
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have改为has
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第二个less改为more
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! o/ s' O% I- R% u1 f0 o* m 去掉第一个and0 ]- X6 B, b \7 t. F) C5 [& c
多个并列位于在最末一位前加and |