Home, sweet home” is a phrase that express an essential
# Z! Y+ T d/ [ h: ~ attitude in the United States. Whether the reality of life in the H% x" p/ N, H
family house is sweet or no sweet, the cherished ideal of home _____1_____8 y" `: \5 Z9 K( @& J+ p
has great importance for many people.
% u) ]3 v2 f0 Z0 b; Y2 x This ideal is a vital part of the American dream. This dream,9 S# ?0 ]% T3 d" V( j6 T$ K
dramatized in the history of nineteenth century European settlers% G. i( r4 p* M
of American West, was to find a piece of place, build a house _____2_____$ J* z1 w( q3 n- R# Z" Y
for one’s family, and started a farm. These small households were _____3_____3 t' {* e+ q6 ~: T. j, N, n
portraits of independence: the entire family- mother, father, children,& n! O9 ]# r; ^1 v# T
even grandparents-live in a small house and working together to _____4_____
- K* p# u' r, `9 @# ^- d/ L support each other. Anyone understood the life-and-death importance _____5_____$ Z5 F1 v ]5 z/ h
of family cooperation and hard work. Although most people in the
: h$ Z5 `( X, L- l3 ?# h) t United States no longer live on farms, but the ideal of home ownership _____6_____
8 Z2 m1 R) S/ _" A is just as strong in the twentieth century as it was in the nineteenth.# R9 D6 B4 R. D5 G
When U.S soldiers came home before World WarⅡ, for example, _____7_____
. ^7 Q1 @; m3 p they dreamed of buying houses and starting families. But there was _____8_____
5 @: I3 s9 z$ y+ U' O6 V7 m, r0 ~ a tremendous boom in home building. The new houses, typically in+ Q1 X, {6 U+ K
the suburbs, were often small and more or less identical, but it satisfied _____9_____
6 ^ e* b3 Y. {9 g a deep need. Many regarded the single-family house the basis of their _____10_____
: G6 G E! u' i way of life.
( L: M% y5 S0 [8 H- W 参考答案及解析:
( O! o" h& g$ v- e+ L 1 将no改为 not- i p6 a7 d" j% w
2 将place改为land
5 n. ~) R7 T I/ p place是可数名词,作“地方”讲,而land意为“土地,田地”是不可数名词。例如:
* P3 ^( q$ ]5 M! Y3 T Solitude is a good place to visit but a poor place to stay.
$ y. m2 j( R4 R j& X; ~; O# s 当你偶尔光顾时,独处是一个美妙的境地,但是如果久留,它却是一个糟糕的地方。
: H0 y; F* K0 e There is a vacant piece of land near the house; we can build there.
# a% q5 | n. x4 w( g 3 将started改为start+ P# z" J. h8 Y) g- h
start应使用不定式,以和前面的find,build一致。( e% y! C- W$ a3 q9 T: S
4 将working改为work。' e1 ?4 I: \+ V) j) z1 g
work应该用第三人称复数,和live一致。另外,family在这里作“家人”讲,是复数。
. i o2 e) Y) B7 k: R$ @1 M 5 将anyone改为everyone
1 F0 p* ?) O0 B* ] 这里是要用everyone指每个人,而不是要用anyone泛指。& D) ~5 h. a( ^6 M+ P
6 将but删除
/ u y3 T* J! Z; E! \: {7 N 7将before改为after
7 Y8 E' t: s% d J 根据上下文判断,这里要表达的是二战之后。
1 I9 g* X6 `6 Z: @8 } 8 将But改为 And& P, [1 O1 D& E& s! J# ^
根据语意,这里要表达的是递进关系,而不是转折关系。例如:3 I$ l$ i7 m1 `5 h
When I do good, I feel good. When I do bad, I feel bad. And that’s my religion.: L9 v& ?! D5 ~7 s7 f9 J
当我行善事,我感到坦然;当我行恶时,我感到内疚。这就是我的人生之道。: p" Y1 [$ s3 ^: h0 |+ q
9 将it改为they
) ?4 k0 o& }# l6 A8 H 10 在house the中间加入介词as
8 v: s4 \0 D8 O2 A2 g" _7 ~; @ regard…as 作“把……当作……”讲。 |