英语专业八级改错练习题及答案解析(118)

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　　Essay examinations are a fact of college life.
# T2 _9 L/ s. @0 n3 k( v　　You may have taken it to enter your present college, __1__
　　to get into an English class,or as requirement__2__
　　in one of your other college courses. Whether they
　　are whole papers written in class and test questions__3__
" [' I1 Q" J; @) {4 c' \$ t8 T　　that require a paragraph response, but essay__4__
　　examinations offer you with the opportunity to express__5__
　　your mastery of a subject--to apply, synthesis,__6__
8 T$ l: \+ H3 g5 t; g　　compare, or describe ideas from your own perspective.
　　They represent a chance for you to demonstrate
　　not only your collection of facts and details,__7__
" Z" H/ {" G1 n　　but also your completely understanding of how all__8__
　　the parts of a topic fit together. Your audience here
% `9 |/ a  f+ i　　is just one person--your instructor--for whom you__9__
' u) Y) h7 N4 b　　must demonstrate your understanding and applying__10__
2 o6 N" x+ E$ y# x; k　　of the course material.
　　答案：
　　1.it改为one
- o+ I/ y+ f. f8 o　　这里需要的代词应理解为“这样的一个考试”，而不是“这个考试”；另外，it的形式与上文的examination不符
　　2. as后加冠词a
　　表示“一个要求”
8 |4 N3 T8 l6 u, s! H4 X5 ^; j9 P( X　　3. and改为or
　　应组成“whether...or...”结构
& t1 Z4 E$ j! B　　4. 去掉but
　　whether开头的句子是一个主从复合句，所以主句前不加连词but
　　5. 去掉with或将offer改为provide
　　offer是及物动词，可跟双宾语
7 l* m  f$ K; f+ m, N0 R　　6.synthesis改为synthesize
　　这里的平行结构除了synthesis之外都是名词，所以需要改为动词形式
9 a) V3 r$ N2 H- U! D  T/ |　　7. collection改为recollection
　　这里不表示“收集”，而是“有关事实和细节的会议”
) K4 i) q, u9 d' e' ^　　8.completely改为complete
+ v& s3 e7 E* m* w9 b* a　　被修饰词understanding是动名词，所以应用形容词来修饰
　　9.for改为to
+ v% b% l9 S; B' T+ i. {　　“for whom”言下之意是“为了指导老师来展示....”，而“to whom”是“展示给老师看”
2 K4 i6 q# b% B　　10.applying改为application
# _1 P. L; e1 K, U: |　　如果一个词本身有名词形式，尽量不要使用动名词