Classic Intention Movement
- j9 j" v7 z; J' E In social situations, the classic Intention Movement is “the
2 D: h! x1 @. l d chair-grasp”. Host and guest have been talking for some time, but- \3 w- d, }4 D9 E& B
now the host has an appointment to keep and can get away. His urge __1__
/ X# L2 @$ e+ e% L/ E) w- \/ B/ _ to go is held in cheek by his desire not be rude to his guest. If he did __2__0 B! h8 a/ Y, i7 M/ P/ Z
not care of his guest’s feelings he would simply get up out of his chair __3__; _, a( }4 t% r2 W' q
and to announce his departure. This is what his body wants to do, __4__
; ?8 H! x! `0 D; R therefore his politeness glues his body to the chair and refuses to let him __5__( K! G$ p/ s( n6 ]1 _0 B0 T0 p
raise. It is at this point that he performs the chair-grasp Intention __6__
" z8 `! e" K: d# l$ S9 a, B* N Movement. He continues to talk to the guest and listen to him, but leans
% T& f+ t) Q4 T& n forward and grasps the arms of the chair as about to push himself upwards. __7__
; j7 `( B3 h( I This is the first act he would make if he were rising. If he were not __8__9 ^2 M3 H) \7 \ Q# C9 [
hesitating, it would only last the fraction of the second. He would lean, __9__
% W* r3 ]% z! l push, rise, and be up. But now, instead, it lasts much longer. He, N5 r, z' q) P; k+ a3 t$ e
holds his “readiness-to-rise” post and keeps on holding it. It is as if his __10__% u/ f! F w# J& ?
body had frozen at the get-ready moment.- z9 E+ {6 G2 [! ?3 D
答案及解析:" p* D5 ]0 w( F0 i
1. 将can改为must
7 ^& f5 l+ y+ a* X/ u2 y$ J 根据上下文的意思“主人有一个约会,必须离开”是客观要求,而不是“能不能”或者“可不可以”的问题。3 w+ W/ ~" Z0 N- b; M5 m
2. not后面加to
* D" ?- l% ~ f0 Q& b- e1 @* o desire 后应该加动词不定式to do something。
9 @& F. i- C ^* o* H) L 3. 将of 改为about& U: I5 G$ V) x* K7 R
care about意思为“对…在意,在乎”,而care of 意思为“转交”9 X) p# ~5 W! k6 J! b5 G: u9 Z0 ?/ R& f9 c
(觉得还可以直接去掉 of,care 本身也有在乎的意思,可是答案不这么写,你怎么看嘞?): a$ J) w2 f" U* O# `+ u* B* c
4. 删掉and或者to。 E) E ^ G' x3 Y& g# p
5. 将therefore 改为 yet或but
2 e6 ~ w8 A& u8 M# _! w0 u 这两部分之间应是转折的关系。
& _+ \$ I9 `. d6 N 6. 将raise改为rise9 {; c% ~; A6 h+ n. r) B
raise 是及物动词,后面必须加宾语,而且在此与文章意思不符。rise意为“起身”,“站起来”,符合文义。9 D; P: C1 F* U0 K
7. 在as 和 about之间加上if或者though, I, m; B& u, Z9 j1 c+ l
此处的意思是主人身子往前倾,双手抓着椅子,好像就要站起来一样。as if/ though to do something 意思为“仿佛要做什么事情”。
( I: q( [& S, n2 } H2 n- R8 B 8. 将make改为perform或do' n3 V: ?2 K) w) D/ U/ W3 ?
此处考查搭配问题,动词make与前面的act不能搭配。
8 {( S0 ?: L5 R r 9.将the改为a
& n6 e- w b7 K4 ~ a fraction of a second 意思为非常短暂的时间。
) \ E; F5 q( Q. V 10. 将post改为posture |