About half of the infant and maternal deaths in developing countries could be avoided if women had used family planning methods to prevent high risk ____1____pregnancies, according to a report publishing recently by the Johns Hopking ____2____University.
! r, q2 H! a* ]- f The report indicates that 5.6 million infant deaths and 2,000,000 maternal
# U( l% r4 Z8 l) Q% j' m0 T; K1 x% x% s Deaths could be prevented this year if women chose to have theirs children ____3____within the safest years with adequate intervals among births and limited their ____4____families to moderate size." D X( G/ q6 u E9 O$ N9 i- L
This amounts to about half of the 9.8 million infant and 370.000 maternal deaths in developing countries, excluded China, estimated for this year by ____5____the United Nation’s Children’s Fund and the US Centers for Disease Control respectably. China was excluded because very few births occur in the high ____6____risk categories.
. ?2 F/ d$ T( h' D2 j8 ? The report says that evidences from around the world shows the risk of ____7____maternal or infant ill and death is the highest in four specific types of ____8_____pregnancy; pregnancies before the mother is 18 year old; those after the ____9____mother is 35 years old; pregnancies after four births; and those lesser than ____10____two years apart.
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因为此句是虚拟语气,表示与现在事实相反,故条件从句中应使用一般过去时。例如: x9 _- _5 E7 u: b, |
Many would be wise if they did not think themselves wise. 许多人原本会成为聪明人-如果他们不自以为聪明的话。- Z2 ?: l4 G+ v4 u ~
2 将publishing改为published
, m0 _6 Z' r# Z+ Z1 n- p. Q9 ^2 l report和publish时逻辑动宾关系,故应使用publish的过去分词短语来修饰report。例如:
& V& L: U. m# H! ]& M+ G- K Any discovery that we may make, however small, will remain acquired knowledge. 任何可能的发现,不管多么微不足道,都将成为知识宝库中的一部分。4 R% X8 r5 z8 K
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在两次怀孕期间留出足够的间隔时间,故用between。 h O$ O- n* `% L# \0 f. T
5 将过去分词excluded改为介词excluding。
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$ w2 n4 ~! K! F+ i, U: J) n1 W 6 将respectably改为respectively
+ t' n2 m" q4 w8 g# K1 z1 A8 W respectively 意为 “分别地 ”,符合句子的意思。而respectably意为 “可敬的,值得尊敬地 ”。8 a2 E; b4 e( ~+ }1 t4 P
7将evidences改为evidence。
6 B9 }: ]0 {4 A/ d evidence是不可数名词。8 g3 F# Z% o+ b5 E2 Z
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9将year改为years。2 Q) E7 i# n6 G! ]
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